Paradise (poem) by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner on AuthorsDen

Reviewed by Birgit and Roger Pratcher

Reviewed on May 30, 2006

Very tempting to drop everything and join in!
Love, Birgit and Roger

Reviewed by Sherri Smith

Reviewed on May 27, 2006

Truly restful and peceful. Beautiful writing.

Sherri

Reviewed by Mr. Ed

Reviewed on May 27, 2006

Substitute an ice-cold beer for that diet pop, and put that porch in the woods, and it's Heaven on Earth for me, too.

Reviewed by Michelle Kidwell Power In The Pen

Reviewed on May 27, 2006

Great write here and I love the pic, can I come? LOL
God Bless
Michelle!

Reviewed by Cynth'ya Reed

Reviewed on May 27, 2006

You've found heaven Sis. This place looks so inviting, especially for a writer!
blessin's and (((hugs)))
cynth'ya

Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)

Reviewed on May 27, 2006

Just lookout for any spiders lurking above or neath..

Reviewed by Connie Hinnen Cook (Reader)

Reviewed on May 26, 2006

If I can pick the place and the fellow "rockers" ~
could indeed be Heaven on Earth! :)

Reviewed by totally anonymous (Reader)

Reviewed on May 26, 2006

great write count me in but no diet anything for me

Reviewed by Ed Matlack

Reviewed on May 26, 2006

Bet that little chair would be yours too...LOL, Ed

Reviewed by Richard Cederberg

Reviewed on May 26, 2006

Oh MY!
I would love to spend more restful days on that porch in that swing on the end. I think though that I would trade the Diet Coke for a vintage Bordeaux, or a lovely old Cabernet Sauvignon.
This was very sweet!

Richard

Reviewed by Michelle Mills

Reviewed on May 26, 2006

Oh dang, this is simply put, clever, and refreshing. Loved it! Michelle

Reviewed by bluecornflower orangetiger

Reviewed on May 26, 2006

reminds me of NY State, course the pine barrens too. good writing and God bless.

Reviewed by Gloria Gay

Reviewed on May 26, 2006

Wonderful porch; wonderful poem; quietly soothing.

Reviewed by Sage Sweetwater

Reviewed on May 26, 2006

The pic quite resembles my deck and scenery. I live in the mountains and Paradise is having an ice cold drink on the deck gliding in the porch swing thinking about your next poem. Rain is needed to keep our minds fertile as well as nature. Hope you get rain soon, Karla!

Sage

Reviewed by A PAX

Reviewed on May 26, 2006

I love the rain
and your poem is picturesque
relax and enjoy Karla
just chill
pax lol A

Reviewed by Susan de Vegter

Reviewed on May 26, 2006

Many of my great memories is a log cabin in the Appalachians...watching the eagles below and breathing easy. I would sit for hours in the absolute peace I enjoyed with nature. Great memories and your poetry sparked them along.
My Thanks!
Love and peace,
Susan

Reviewed by Felix Perry

Reviewed on May 26, 2006

Ah such a clear image, I could almost picture me sitting out there with you playing a nice slow country ballad on my old six string.

Felix

Reviewed by Peter Paton

Reviewed on May 26, 2006

Karla
It sounds like Paradise indeed, Karla...
Make mine an iced tea please...:)
Love
Peter

Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado

Reviewed on May 26, 2006

Karla~

Can I join you in paradise? Sounds like a bueno idea to me! *grins* Very well done; brava!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your twin sister, Karen Lynn. :D

Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)

Reviewed on May 26, 2006

Sounds like prayers have truly been annswered.

Reviewed by Rebecca Burns (Reader)

Reviewed on May 26, 2006

I wish that I could send some rain your way. It has been raining for a month at least. Driving was just so bad in it. We complain when we have it and when we don't. I pray you get relief soon.
Rebecca