Defeat (poem) by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner on AuthorsDen

Reviewed on August 1, 2006

De feet cam be a blessing. I thank the Lord that I still have both of them.

Hank

Reviewed on July 31, 2006

You gotta believe it... when the ol' one-two cuts in, then it's right back at it with the ol ten-nine-eight... and, ding-ding, you'll have won. Defeat is NOT in the Dorman Dictionary, THAT's for certain sure. Great overcoming pen, oh Lady of the Silver Punchbag... love and prayers, Kate xx

Reviewed by jude forese

Reviewed on July 30, 2006

you do have the determination to go on for many more rounds, Karla ... that endurance is the sign of a true fighter ...

Reviewed by Theresa Koch

Reviewed on July 30, 2006

This strength of yours shines forth in your touching words friend!

Reviewed by Retta (Reindeer) Mckenzie

Reviewed on July 30, 2006

Oh Karla, love your strength here, this is outstanding, stay strong and keep your beautiful spirit,

Reindeer

Reviewed by Birgit and Roger Pratcher

Reviewed on July 30, 2006

A strong poem about the defeats of life, wonderful done! We love Felix' comment to it, we're sure he's right,
Love and hugs, B&R

Reviewed by Felix Perry

Reviewed on July 29, 2006

You will be up and floating like a butterfly before you know it.

Fee

Reviewed by Sandie May Joyce (Sandie Angel)

Reviewed on July 29, 2006

Karla, when you put your mind to it, anything can be defeated. Good luck to you, brave girl!!!!!

Sandie May Angel a.k.a. Sandie Angel :o)

Reviewed by Michelle Kidwell Power In The Pen

Reviewed on July 29, 2006

Karla great write of courage, when you get this review please read my Urgent Warning poem, the message could be lifesaving, write on and be blessed in the writing
God Bless
Michelle~

Reviewed by Douglas Bentley

Reviewed on July 29, 2006

Inspiration. . . . .
Abundant. . . . .
Reminded me of a cat
How she always lands
On her feet.
No "Defeat" in you I can clearly see.
DWB

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes

Reviewed on July 29, 2006

Positive offering Karla!!

Love tinka

Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)

Reviewed on July 29, 2006

The people who get on in this world are the people who get up and look for the cicumstances they want.
If they can't find them, make them..
GBS..
Defeat is dun n dusted in your life..
Congrats on you onward success...

Reviewed by E T Waldron

Reviewed on July 29, 2006

As long as you think that way you can't be beat! As I only have the use of one hand right now, I say the same thing;-)Love and prayers to yo Karla! eileen

Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado

Reviewed on July 29, 2006

Karla, thy name is courage. It clearly shows in this write; all you can do is hope that tomorrow brings positiveness to your life; Lord knows, you certainly deserve it! Very well penned; brava!

(((HUGS))), much love, and many prayers, your twin sister, Karen Lynn. :D

Reviewed by Dawn Richerson

Reviewed on July 29, 2006

you certainly are, Karla. rest and when you're stronger you one-two-three punch back. Dawn

Reviewed by Aberjhani

Reviewed on July 29, 2006

No question here that these lines are much stronger than DEFEAT:-) The very source of their considerable creative energy shines like wings that seemingly lift the poet up from despair into inspired and determined victory.
Aberjhani

Reviewed by Susan de Vegter

Reviewed on July 29, 2006

We humans are resillient and we bounce back luike a Tonka truck.
You are a master of your mind. Think beauty as an alternative to pain and float above it. This works for mw.
My prayers are with you...especially in this heat!!
God bless you!
Love and peace!
Susan

Reviewed by Peter Paton

Reviewed on July 29, 2006

Karla

I greatly admire your resillience and tenacity..

Shalom

Peter

Reviewed by Susan Sonnen

Reviewed on July 29, 2006

this is an inspiring poem of self-confidence! you have great strength, Karla.

Susan

Reviewed by Ed Matlack

Reviewed on July 29, 2006

I don't just believe you are, I KNOW...! Ed

Reviewed by Mr. Ed

Reviewed on July 29, 2006

We all believe you are, too!!