Alert (poem) by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner on AuthorsDen

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes

Reviewed on August 11, 2006

Scary times we live in SIS!!

I am worried SICK about someone flying back home tomorrow!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by Rebecca Burns (Reader)

Reviewed on August 11, 2006

You are so deep girl. That was good.
Rebecca

Reviewed by Mr. Ed

Reviewed on August 11, 2006

Death stalks us all these wicked days it seems, Karla - and we must very sadly be on alert for everything now.

Reviewed by Kate Burnside

Reviewed on August 11, 2006

You have adeptly captured that pressure behind the eyeballs and the pounding of the swollen brain against the temples when that sudden bloodrush of panic strikes, Karla. A most unique and well-crafted take on that most ikky of feelings... vulnerability and choking fear. Gets the adrenalin pumping, at any rate. Excellent, thank you.. Kate xx

Reviewed by E T Waldron

Reviewed on August 10, 2006

Excellent work Karla! There is so much to make us remember today!
We shall never forget!

Eileen

Reviewed by jude forese

Reviewed on August 10, 2006

living in NYC, one is always on alert ...

a much needed and finely penned message ...

Reviewed by Dawn Richerson

Reviewed on August 10, 2006

nice rhythm and form and a message that must be sounded again and again. thanks for the call to vigilance. Dawn

Reviewed by Susan Sonnen

Reviewed on August 10, 2006

well written, Karla

Reviewed by Susan de Vegter

Reviewed on August 10, 2006

The Brits have the wisdom over us in keeping terrorism a constant priority for national security. We need to listen up and watch how it's down by our free world brothers. We got caught sleeping once...the Brits caught the terrorists sleeping this time...we need to have all of our radar up 24/7 and we need to remind ourselves daily that one life lost to terrorim is one too many.
Thank you for keeping the Den on our toes. Here's hoping all the free world will listen abd stay tuned.
Love and peace.
Susan

Reviewed by Phyllis Jean Green

Reviewed on August 10, 2006

Brilliant! Form you created makes the message stand out loud and clear. Takes a great mind and a poetic soul to create a work
that is deceptively simple and deeply affecting. BRAVA, my friend,
BRAVA !!!! 'Pea' <3 {I can barely type. Hornets stung my hands when I was pruning a redtip...got those in Texas, right? Heat and humidity have the hornets mad as. . .well. . .hornets. Barstards got me! Grrrrrrrr.)

Reviewed by Chanti Niven

Reviewed on August 10, 2006

Wise words and an effective write. Karla your work is outstanding.
Chanti

Reviewed by Michelle Kidwell Power In The Pen

Reviewed on August 10, 2006

Karla powerful write here, but very well done, write on and be blessed, I love reading your poetry
God Bless
Michelle~

Reviewed by Richard Cederberg

Reviewed on August 10, 2006

Indeed the storm clouds are forming again on the horizon dear Karla. And I concur with your encouragement also to stay alert.

This generation may just see many things extraordinary taking place on this planet in the near future.

Let us pray for peace and hope for the wisdom to remain free. Excellent thoughts!

In fraternity ...
Richard Lloyd Cederberg

Reviewed by Rhonda Galizia

Reviewed on August 10, 2006

Excellent write, Karla!

How quickly some people return to their self-imposed blindness.......how unshakingly, the rest of us must keep vigil......as the Watchmen on the wall! God help us all!

Loev&Hugs, Rhonda

Reviewed by Peter Paton

Reviewed on August 10, 2006

Karla

Stay awake, the enemy never sleeps..

And lets hope all those peaceniks come to their senses, and realise
that hordes of vermin, are seeking to overun our country, and subjugate us to their Satanic Doctrines

Shalom

Peter

Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado

Reviewed on August 10, 2006

We must never forget and do all we can to get rid of these jerks! A nightmare all over again; God help us!!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your twin sister, Karen Lynn. :( >tears <

Never forget!!

Reviewed by Regis Auffray

Reviewed on August 10, 2006

Indeed, Karla; an we must remain alert on many levels. Thank you for sharing these sentiments. Love and peace to you,

Regis