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Welfare
by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner → (All Poetry by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner)
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Ain't there yet, but times is hard, real hard...


"Welfare"

guv'ment forms make her stomach knot
in triplicate
as she signs up for the dole.
they want to know
everything--any assets
that she has, why
she's not working,
and why should good taxpayers support her
any damn way?
how long is she planning on being on
her dead ass, how
many kids she's got and do they got
the same fathers,
what kind of car is she driving,
what life is left
after the bills suck her dry, and how is she
paying them in
the first damn place, how much
money she has
tucked aside for a rainy afternoon...
her dignity
exposed in black and white and assigned
a case number.

(c) 2006, Karla Dorman

 

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 Reviews of "Welfare"
Reviewed on September 6, 2006
I have been there myself, thankfully the Lord is blessing us, and I am praying he blesses you as well
God Bless
Michelle~

Reviewed by Regis Auffray
Reviewed on August 31, 2006
This is the harsh reality for many and it is just the same here, Karla. No one should have to go through such humiliation but then, there are wars to be fought and that's where the money goes. Sad. Very, very sad. Thank you, my friend. Love and peace to you,

Regis

Reviewed by Nordette Adams
Reviewed on August 31, 2006
WOW! The whole process is so demeaning, had to get food stamps once many years ago. This is a hard-hitting write, Karla. ~~Nordette

Reviewed by H. Lena Jones
Reviewed on August 31, 2006
An accurate description of welfare systems everywhere in the world, Karla. My big question is why the wasted money on wars and space adventures etc., when people at home are scraping the barrel...!

Love always
Lena

Reviewed by Rebecca Burns (Reader)
Reviewed on August 31, 2006
I logged in to den just to comment, that was really good, the last line was on the dot.
Rebecca

Reviewed by Mr. Ed
Reviewed on August 31, 2006
guv'ment forms make her stomach knot
in triplicate

A feeling sadly known by many.

Reviewed by Ch'erie de Perrot
Reviewed on August 31, 2006
For those of us who are genuinely in need of welfare, yes we become a stat in the govt records. A number in a book!
No dignity afforded anymore, exposed open wide for all those scathing eyes that havent a damn clue, till they find themselves ill, unable to work, life gone wrong, finances in the dunny...
You can never know anothers pain or circumstance, till you've walked a mile in their shoes!!
Well written, needed to be said, TY Karla hon, Good onyan for penning this.

Take care and head up girl, stuff anyone who even tries the superior routine on yah.
Love Ch'erie

Reviewed by Susan de Vegter
Reviewed on August 30, 2006
Paperwork us just piles of stuff to file later, get lost and be redone. The whole system sucks.
My prayers are with you.
Love,
Susan

Reviewed by Felix Perry
Reviewed on August 30, 2006
There is certainly a need for questions and when dealing with money that belongs to taxpayers due diligence is necessary however when the employers hire their interviewers more consideration should be given to employees with tact and people skills. Well written glimpse into the user side of the system.

Fee

Reviewed by Dove JoAnne Cromp (Reader)
Reviewed on August 30, 2006
At least it aint as bad as the 1920's with the great depression..Your right, things have gotta get better, though..

Eternal Love, Dove

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Reviewed on August 30, 2006
Those asking those questions has no bloody idea what it takes to answer those crab questions....and if you tell them you have nothing they still want to know why!!
God knows all they need to still ask is what color panty you are wearing!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by Myrna Badgerow
Reviewed on August 30, 2006
The very word 'Welfare' leaves a bitter taste in most mouths... those who don't want to need it. Some unfortunately do not have tastebuds. As my cousin who once worked in the welfare says 'The system works in mysterious ways..' and I can't repeat the rest of it...))
Great little piece!

Myrna

Reviewed by Victor Buhagiar (Reader)
Reviewed on August 30, 2006
It's the same the world over. Those who ask questions are sitting pretty. Ask them to change places. They'll whine rest assured.
Hope you will have better times. Victor

Reviewed by Peter Paton
Reviewed on August 30, 2006
Karla

It don't matter what they the beaurocrats say or do,.... or anyone else...it's your entitlement to welfare, when your circumstances dictate..

Hold your head up high sister..

I am praying for you and Karen non stop..

Think of all that wonderful God given rain in Texas now..

Now there our prayers were answered too..

Read Don Miguel Ruiz's book " The Four Agreements " to change your life overnight for the better

agreement 1
Be impeccable with your word - Speak with integrity. Say only what you mean. Avoid using the word to speak against yourself or to gossip about others. Use the power of your word in the direction of truth and love.

agreement 2
Don’t take anything personally - Nothing others do is because of you. What others say and do is a projection of their own reality, their own dream. When you are immune to the opinions and actions of others, you won’t be the victim of needless suffering.

agreement 3
Don’t make assumptions - Find the courage to ask questions and to express what you really want. Communicate with others as clearly as you can to avoid misunderstandings, sadness and drama. With just this one agreement, you can completely transform your life.

agreement 4
Always do your best - Your best is going to change from moment to moment; it will be different when you are healthy as opposed to sick. Under any circumstance, simply do your best, and you will avoid self-judgment, self-abuse and regret.


Love and Blessings

Peter

Reviewed by Gwen Dickerson
Reviewed on August 30, 2006
Taxpayers don't mind contributing to those welfare recipients who are honestly in need of assistance. Many are rightfully entitled because of unfortunate circumstance. Many have served their country, are ill, handicapped, unable to obtain employment, or are victims of many other things that have qualified them for welfare assistance. Unfortunately, as always, there are many others who take advantage and abuse the system. These are the ones that make the taxpayers see "red!"

A very well written and expressive poem, Karla!

Reviewed on August 30, 2006
Then people wonder why they don't like the government. Things are so screwy; nothing is going right! Crazy times we live in nowadays! Rant on, baby girl; I hear ya! Powerful, eye-opening write that doesn't pull any punches; very well penned! BRAVA!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your twin sister, Karen Lynn. :(

Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on August 30, 2006
It's terrible ,but nothing comes easy in life. Even when we think others have it so much better,we never know their troubles. There is no free lunch. In one way or another we have to pay, sometimes with our pride and our hearts.Hang in there Karla,it will get better. Keeping you in prayer.

Love,
Eileen


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