1st of the Month (poem) by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner on AuthorsDen

Reviewed by A Serviceable Villain

Reviewed on October 23, 2008

Karla,

Always written from your heart . . . always exceptional!!

Hugs,

Lance

Reviewed by Axilea MU

Reviewed on November 20, 2007

Simple and to the point. Life is also made of precise moments, of living in the present.

Warmest best,

Axilea

Reviewed by Regis Auffray

Reviewed on October 8, 2006

I love your attitude, Karla. Thanks for this. Love and peace to you,

Regis

Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado

Reviewed on October 6, 2006

Drives one bonkers, doesn't it? I am so sorry you have to go through this! Very well penned poem!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your twin sister, Karen Lynn. :(

Reviewed by Paul Berube

Reviewed on October 6, 2006

Karla,
I often wondered why they say money burns a hole in ones pocket.
Half the time it never gets that far. Good one my friend.

Reviewed by William Bonilla

Reviewed on October 5, 2006

So true ..Karla
I worry about no bills
let the bills worry about me

Love & Peace
William

Reviewed by jude forese

Reviewed on October 5, 2006

i get paid bi-monthly, so i go through this twice a month ;)

Reviewed by E T Waldron

Reviewed on October 5, 2006

Reviewed by P. Michaels (Reader)

Reviewed on October 5, 2006

I can identify with this one, Karla. That first of the month income doesn't cover it all. Does it? Life is just one big struggle. Two incomes would help, right? We have to just keep on thinking that its 'very good day, today' and be thankful for what we have, right? I enjoyed your poem.

Best wishes and prayers.

Reviewed by Michelle Kidwell Power In The Pen

Reviewed on October 5, 2006

Karla my first does not last long enough with rent, and bills, but it is true for a moment we are allowed to feel rich, and I thank God that despite the struggles I have a place to rest my head at night, and I am rich in not the montetary sense but in what really matters
God Bless
Michelle~

Reviewed by H. Lena Jones

Reviewed on October 5, 2006

Cute, Karla! :)

God Bless
Love, Lena

Reviewed by Joyce Bowling

Reviewed on October 5, 2006

Cute poem...very true...I think we can all relate.
Blessings,
Joyce Bowling

Reviewed by J M (Reader)

Reviewed on October 5, 2006

A cheerful attitude makes one feel every day good wether or weather not...
NICE JOB>>>>>
Blessings,
Joselyn

Reviewed by Myrna Badgerow

Reviewed on October 5, 2006

I get to wait until the third Wednesday...lol Sure doesn't last long...

Myrna

Reviewed by Peter Paton

Reviewed on October 5, 2006

Karla

It's a never ending cycle
Try the Powerball, you might strike it Lucky !!

Love

Peter

Reviewed by Victor Buhagiar (Reader)

Reviewed on October 5, 2006

Are we all living from hand to mouth? You bet we are. Lovely poem, Victor

Reviewed by Abdi-Noor Mohamed (Eagle Of Hope)

Reviewed on October 5, 2006

First of the month a ray of hope shining in the heart of the AD. Your brother in Africa

Reviewed by CJ Heck

Reviewed on October 5, 2006

This is a fun poem, Karla -- you've kinda summed it up for most of us on the planet (giggling).
Many hugs,
CJ

Reviewed by Felix Perry

Reviewed on October 5, 2006

So true to the bone this one is, it is such a nice feeling when the bills are paid and you look into your account and say yea there is even a few dollars left for me.

Fee

Reviewed by Andre Bendavi ben-YEHU

Reviewed on October 5, 2006

Mind's striking composition... "1st of the Month" glows.

Helathy long creative life, Poet.

Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU

Reviewed by Richard Cederberg

Reviewed on October 5, 2006

And I am glad to hear this positive declaration dear Karla.

It's like I always say: "Before the paycheck arrives, it's already spent."

I am sincerely glad that this is a good day for you.

Richard Lloyd Cederberg

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes

Reviewed on October 5, 2006

lol....mine only last for one day too...and after the bills are paid I am deeper into the red!!

Love Tinka