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Endless
by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner → (All Poetry by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner)
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The night, endless; vertically,
horizontally, endless; the
icy blue cold of the bitter
season surrounds me with deadly
fingers:  where, where is the sun I
need to warm the bones?  Where is the
Light?  Will this torturous winter
ever cease, or will they find me,
stiff, when the snow finally melts?

(c) 2006, Karla Dorman.  (10/13)


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 Reviews of "Endless"
Reviewed by Rhonda Galizia
Reviewed on October 14, 2006
FLEECE IS THE ANSWER, TO EVERY QUESTION...IN THE WINTER!
It is a Godsend, Karla - a natural healer and tremendously eases muscular pain..take it from one who knows!

Clever and profound write, Sister..
Love & WARM Hugs, Rhonda

Reviewed on October 14, 2006
Yes it's that time of year again.

Reviewed on October 14, 2006
Exquisite. touching warm fingers with cold hearts

Reviewed on October 13, 2006
Great write here I enjoyed this one
God Bless
Michelle~

Reviewed by Susan de Vegter
Reviewed on October 13, 2006
Snow? Now? Already. I'm heading for my bedroom and grabbing a pair of socks. My tootsies are cold.
Love,
Susan

Reviewed by Ron (sketchman) Axelson (Reader)
Reviewed on October 13, 2006
Oh hon winter hasen't even started yet
Great write karla..
x0x0x0x

Reviewed by Regis Auffray
Reviewed on October 13, 2006
Winter; it is very symbolic to me, Karla. I sense it in these verses as well. Thank you. Love and peace to you, your friend from BC, Canada,

Regis

Reviewed by H. Lena Jones
Reviewed on October 13, 2006
Made me smile, this one, Karla. See, there's no pleasing humankind. When it's hot, we want it cold; when it's cold, we want it hot. What is God to do? :)

God Bless
Love, Lena

Reviewed by J M (Reader)
Reviewed on October 13, 2006
OH did you have to say that dread word """WINTER""" aling with the expressions suggesting it LOL... BRRRRRRRRRRRRR hot cocoa for me...
Loved it Karla,
Hugs, Light and Love,
Joselyn

Reviewed by Susan Sonnen
Reviewed on October 13, 2006
I like this....for me, as I read this, the cold and snow could be conditions of one's heart or the hearts of those they are close to...fantastic!

Susan

Reviewed by Felix Perry
Reviewed on October 13, 2006
Scary write with my Canadian winter just around the corner,

Fee

Reviewed by Myrna Badgerow
Reviewed on October 13, 2006
Sometimes that layer of snow can offer us much protection too....Wonderful poem Karla!

Myrna

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Reviewed on October 13, 2006
Awwwww...keep yourself warm gal!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by Victor Buhagiar (Reader)
Reviewed on October 13, 2006
Poor Karla. We would hate to see you stiff dead. Put on some "warm" clothes. I am still thinking of your previous poem. Victor

Reviewed by Rusty Daily
Reviewed on October 13, 2006
Well, I hope not. This poems seems like it is a good metaphor for troubled times, intended or not. Enjoyed
Rusty

Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)
Reviewed on October 13, 2006
Oh you need erm teaching...He will be stiff, you will be grinning.
Seya behind the bikeshed....

Reviewed by Kate Clifford (Reader)
Reviewed on October 13, 2006
People in Bufflo are probably asking this question right about now....

Fantastic on our cooler weather and how it affects us. Makes me think of Cabin fever. Great descriptions.

Reviewed by Peter Paton
Reviewed on October 13, 2006
Karla

The only way from the bottom is Up..
Create your own perfect reality..

God Bless

Peter

Reviewed by CJ Heck
Reviewed on October 13, 2006
Beautifully expressed, Karla -- we've all been there before, but you have captured the sentiments so well with your words.
Very well done.
Love,
CJ

Reviewed on October 13, 2006
Karla,

Powerfully expressed write of innermost feelings; hope things will get better for the both of us; it has to! Very well done; brava!

(((HUGS))), much love, and many, many prayers, your twin sister, Karen Lynn. :(

Reviewed by Ed Matlack
Reviewed on October 13, 2006
Seems not so long ago someone was bitching about it being TOO hot...;) e & R

Reviewed on October 13, 2006
A well-expressed piece of your feelings. Hope the season will change soon for the seasons inside your heart and soul!

Love this well-expressed piece!!!

Sandie May Angel a.k.a. Sandie Angel :o)


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