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Get. Out. While. We. Can--
by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner → (All Poetry by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner)
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Madness, thy name is domestic violence.

This isn't about me, but it is about the millions who suffer abuse at the hands of wife-husband-child beaters. If my words save one life, they will be worth it.

GET. OUT. WHILE. YOU. CAN.

There will be mud on the carpet tonight
and blood in the gravy as well.
The wifebeater is out,
the childbeater is out
eating soil and drinking bullets from a cup.
He strides back and forth
in front of my window
chewing little red pieces of my heart.
His eyes flash like a birthday cake
and he makes bread out of rock.....
from THE WIFEBEATER, Anne Sexton.

"GET.  OUT.  WHILE.  WE.  CAN--"

stalked! by a madman who is a
husband and father to the kids,
sucking us into his vortex, ranting
and raving about what we did
to piss him off:
he slams us into the doors of his
fists, banging, banging! our heads
against the walls of his anger,
until we fall down, dead
tired of the lies:
why can't i stop this craziness
once and for all eternity?
what's it going to take
for me to finally see what
harm i'm doing?
held down by fear of what he'll
do will put us in the grave
if i don't end this now.  e n o u g h!
already, no more! be brave, get.
out.  while.  we.  can--


(c) 2006, Karla Dorman.  (10/25)


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 Reviews of "Get. Out. While. We. Can--"
Reviewed by jude forese
Reviewed on October 27, 2006
potently written, Karla ... wise advise that is unfortunately easier said than done ... it takes a lot of strength to walk away ... an important issue that must be addresssed over and over ...

Reviewed by Dawn Richerson
Reviewed on October 27, 2006
thanks for tackling tough issues like this, Karla. well done and good advice, Dawn

Reviewed by Susan de Vegter
Reviewed on October 27, 2006
I know the terror here. His first name was Ralph. He yelled, beat his fists. knocked me down with the car door and he conditioned me so I could walk away without looking back. Thank God!He would've killed me had I stayed. Get out is the first step. Don't look back.
Love,
Susan

Reviewed by Felix Perry
Reviewed on October 27, 2006
Important message and strong advice delivered in both the prelude and the actual write. Well said Karla.

Fee

Reviewed by H. Lena Jones
Reviewed on October 27, 2006
Only cowards and insecure men behave in this manner, I feel, Karla. For what well-adjusted,decent human-being would want to take advantage of a woman like this? But God sees all, and this behavior will not go unpunished in the end. This is a sad piece...telling it as it is. Well done brave soul.

God Bless
LOL
Lena

Reviewed by Carmen Ruggero
Reviewed on October 27, 2006
Great advice. Hard for victims of abuse to get there. Thank you for sharing this.

Carmen :-)

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Reviewed on October 27, 2006
Sighhhhhhhh...you said it well KARLA!!

Love Tinks

Reviewed on October 27, 2006
This is a sad relatity, but for many it is a reality, I thank God it is not mine and pray it never is
God Bless
Michelle~

Reviewed by Myrna Badgerow
Reviewed on October 27, 2006
A good pen.. casting light upon a tragedy of human relationships.

Myrna

Reviewed by Daring Sunshine
Reviewed on October 27, 2006
A facet of abuse...it fits the pain of others similarities; Good write Karla!
Peace&Grace,
Sharon

Reviewed by J M (Reader)
Reviewed on October 27, 2006
Abuse touches me deeply in memoirs their are so many forms of abuse..... This is powerful and I say with tears.

Light Peace, Love,
Joselyn

Reviewed on October 27, 2006
Wow this is marvellous advice Karla. Wifebeaters should be brought to justice. Your friend and brother in Africa

Reviewed by Victor Buhagiar (Reader)
Reviewed on October 27, 2006
Wise advice. But I don't think it's madness. It think it's just plain evil. Victor

Reviewed by Peter Paton
Reviewed on October 27, 2006
Karla

You highlight the growing malaise and menace in our midst these days, both male and female domestic violence..

I hope and pray that you are alright

Love and Blessings

Peter

Reviewed on October 27, 2006
Powerful message you have shared here in this disturbing, yet much needed write! BRAVA; very well done, Karla!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your twin sister, Karen Lynn. :( >tears! <

Reviewed by Rusty Daily
Reviewed on October 27, 2006
I have never been involved in a family of abuse but in talking to those who have, I appreciate the bravery it takes to get out while you can. Nicely done Karla
Rusty

Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on October 27, 2006
Amen! get out while you can! I took abuse far too long and hurt my children and family because of it. Fine writing Karla!

Love,
Eileen

Reviewed by Dove JoAnne Cromp (Reader)
Reviewed on October 27, 2006
So glad I have never been in that situation but it leaves one to pray for these poor helpless people..

LOve,
Dove

Reviewed by Mr. Ed
Reviewed on October 27, 2006
GET. OUT. WHILE. YOU. CAN...

The very best advice there is, Karla.

Reviewed by Ed Matlack
Reviewed on October 27, 2006
Spousal abuse can go both ways...not often but...e


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