Color Me ... (poem) by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner on AuthorsDen

Reviewed on March 21, 2007

Official beginning of spring for Ohio is today, and it started with Severe Storm warning. Well done Karla. Stay safe.

Abdullahi.

Reviewed by Kate Burnside

Reviewed on March 21, 2007

Can relate to this intensely, Karla. I think my whole mind and mood-frame is a severe weather-front, ruled by clouds or sunshine, depending on what is peeking through my curtains at the time... Perhaps you could write a poem about rain falling as droplets of sunshine instead, changing direction and floating instead of falling... Anything to re-direct the energies... Sending love, prayers and oodles of fairy dust your way.... :)) xoxoxox

Reviewed by Michelle Kidwell Power In The Pen

Reviewed on March 21, 2007

Karla I am praying for you, keep on, keeping on, and may the Lord bless you
God Bless
Michelle~

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes

Reviewed on March 21, 2007

Oh my goodness I feel like that cloud myself!!

Take care sis...and Hugs from afar!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by Richard Cederberg

Reviewed on March 21, 2007

You write delicately Karla, but with such emotional strength too. The two elements seem to meld seamlessly together and always touch this readers heart. You are gifted.

Light and Wisdom ...

Reviewed by Sue Hess

Reviewed on March 21, 2007

we are expecting bad storms tomorrow...i'm never prepared for them

Reviewed by Felix Perry

Reviewed on March 21, 2007

STrong impressionist image created here with the comparison of the storm to your feelings, and yes I do think the weather can compliment and often mimic our feelings or vice versa. Good one Karla.

Fee

Reviewed by CJ Heck

Reviewed on March 21, 2007

You've done a great job here, Karla, the personification works so well! An excellent poem and description.
Love,
CJ

Reviewed by Georg Mateos

Reviewed on March 21, 2007

For Karla:

Don't be sorry if you ever feel gray,
because gray is the color of
the ashes of loves past,
gray is the color of the brain,
gray is the color when is the black
the one that you don't want.

Hold there...
Georg

Reviewed by Mr. Ed

Reviewed on March 21, 2007

Tears, they say, must sometimes fall just like rain,
But once they have fallen, sunshine will come again.

Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado

Reviewed on March 21, 2007

Karla,

I am sorry you are feeling as grey as the clouds; here's hoping that sunshine soon streams your way! Powerful pen of tumultuous emotions; may the storms of life soon go away! You are in my prayers today, Dear Karla! BRAVA!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your twin sister, Karen Lynn. :( >tears! <

Reviewed by La Belle Rouge Poetess Of The Heart

Reviewed on March 21, 2007

This is heart touching Karla, beautifully penned.