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Smile When You Go Down
by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner → (All Poetry by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner)
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... When the cruise ship you
are on strikes the rocks of life,
and you're sinking fast ...

smile when you go down.
The waves are temporary;
help is on the way.

(c) 2007, Karla Dorman (4/9)


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 Reviews of "Smile When You Go Down"
Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Reviewed on April 11, 2007
Yip smile or swim like hell before sharky getZ you GOOD!!

Love Tinka


Reviewed by Kathryn Collins (Reader)
Reviewed on April 10, 2007
Karla --

Concise and focused. Very hopeful.

Kathy

Reviewed by Daring Sunshine
Reviewed on April 9, 2007
We all feel that at times and it's cute to remember to keep smiling...full of smiles!

Sharon

Reviewed by Anna Marie Fritz (Reader)
Reviewed on April 9, 2007
This is MY kind of "Love Boat," Karla!

A great write.

Reviewed by Henry Lefevre
Reviewed on April 9, 2007
Oh for the ship that will never go down. The cold waters chill me and I'm alergic to sharks.

Hank
author of "A Spoonful of Humor" now available through Amazon.com

Reviewed by Felix Perry
Reviewed on April 9, 2007
I smiled when I read the titlw Karla, slap me, anyway the poem is good advice and a write to be proud of.
hugs
Fee

Reviewed by Nicky Goodman
Reviewed on April 9, 2007
Oh yes! Agreeeeed! :o) Great short write, Nicky x

Reviewed by Jibril Mohamed
Reviewed on April 9, 2007
Karla, this is a very powerful message showing your unlimited strenght.

Thank you and keep smiling!

Abdullahi

Reviewed by Phyllis Jean Green
Reviewed on April 9, 2007
T h a n k y o u, K a r l a !! <3xxxx((((( Pea )))))xxxx <3

Reviewed by SaPAth AnANd
Reviewed on April 9, 2007
we sure should smile and keep up the spirit.uplifting tips!

Bom Bhole!
Roshan

Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on April 9, 2007
You aew writing up a storm lately Karla, your muse is soaring!;-)

Love,
Eileen

Reviewed on April 9, 2007
Good advice, Karla; very well done! Love the bouncin' smiley faces; cute!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your twin sister, Karen Lynn. :D

Reviewed on April 9, 2007
Ahh now that is a positive idea~hope all head it!
Smiles, love, and joy to you.
Have a wonderful day,
~Gwendolyn

Reviewed by Mr. Ed
Reviewed on April 9, 2007
When the cruise ship you
are on strikes the rocks of life,
and you're sinking fast

Something I think we can all relate to very well; and I hope we all remember to render that help when it's needed.


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