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Inadequate
by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner → (All Poetry by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner)
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Why don't I "get it?"

... My Muse betrays me into thinking
our words are worth reading ... if
that's so, why do I feel jealous of
someone else's poetry?

Their words shine like the sun; ours, covered
in cloud decks of depression;
it's hard to see the light through the rain
of tears falling down my face.

Why am I so hard on myself and
feel so damned ... inadequate?

(c) 2007, Karla Dorman (4/19)



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 Reviews of "Inadequate"
Reviewed on May 2, 2007
You are a treasure, do not let yourself be convinced that you are inadequate because you are not, the Lord uses you in a mighty way, and I am blessed to count you amoungst my selective list of favorite poets.
God Bless
Michelle~

Reviewed by Daring Sunshine
Reviewed on April 23, 2007
Quit listening to the lies that haunt you about! You're a treasure worth dieing for - remember, Christ died that you could tell other what an awesome God He is to you and Karen. You both are special and have a special gifts to share!

Reviewed by Susan Sonnen
Reviewed on April 20, 2007
You are exceptional! That is evident within this very poem! :)

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Reviewed on April 20, 2007
We all have our differnt needs,pain and happiness...if we all had to write the same this place woulda been pretty BORINGGGGG!!

So you write your heart out and I will cry mine out as other made us smile for a little while...or get MAD for NOT being the lucky ones to HAVE it all!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by Kathryn Collins (Reader)
Reviewed on April 20, 2007
Inadequate? If the subject is truly about you, forget about it. Think of us as your mirror, we who love to read your poetry.

Your thoughts and feelings echo in my head. They are mine.

xxx's ooo's
Kathy

Reviewed by Georg Mateos
Reviewed on April 20, 2007
This is not coming from a Storm-Spinner!!!!
Your poetry isn't inadequate, you aren't inadequate, you just suffer the blues that everybody has from time to time.
Take a picture of your favorite one and throw dards at it, you will see all the frustration go away at the ridiculous scene and you soon will start laughing.
You are a top Poet, don't dare ever to forget it.
From one of your pals
Georg

Reviewed by Ed Matlack
Reviewed on April 19, 2007
You are not the only one regards that feeling, dear young lady...! Every day we all have some degree of inadequacy, but it is the way we deal with it...right now you are having a bad day, but this too shall pass and along with it, the inadequacy you feel...I am rooting for you and Rufuz sends licky kisses...Ed & Rufuz

Reviewed by P. Michaels (Reader)
Reviewed on April 19, 2007
Karla, I think we all have these moments. You certainly aren't inadequate. We all are unique in our own way. We shouldn't compare ourselves with others. Just because someone is called a winner does not mean that they are better.

Best wishes.
Patty

Reviewed by jude forese
Reviewed on April 19, 2007
every poet is valid and their work competent ... not everything we write is successful in the sense of reaching to others ... that comes with the territory ... writing is a joy ... let that joy fill your heart ... that joy will more than make you feel adequate ...

Reviewed by Susan de Vegter
Reviewed on April 19, 2007
We girls are sometimes harder on ourselves than any other person couild ever be. I'm guilty of this self abuse . We want more and we try hard to be how we estemem ourselves to be and when we come up short...we fold. You're okay with me Karla. I think you are a complete joy!
Love,
Susan

Reviewed by Felix Perry
Reviewed on April 19, 2007
Somtimes our minds and hearts need to write the dark thoughts that our muses sends us in order to move ahead and find the light. Your work is far from inadaquette that is for sure...keep it from the heart.

Fee

Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on April 19, 2007
Karla we all have these feelings but in some the need for reassurance is needed more than with others. You are
anything but inadequate my dear. Your just a poet like
the rest of us;-)

Love,
Eileen

Reviewed by Laura Mayer (Reader)
Reviewed on April 19, 2007
Because you are human dear Karla! We ALL go through this.. I feel inadequate all the time, to the point of doubting myself, I get a little scared when I post something, thinking I will be ridiculed. But I feel more confident all the time, because of the people here at AD, and because of you. Thanks for being honest in this write, and for being you.
Hugs, Laura

Reviewed on April 19, 2007
it's the devil Karla, get over it quick, you're just fine so is your poetry, down to earth great verse

Reviewed by Rusty Daily
Reviewed on April 19, 2007
Perhaps THEY feel jealous of yours. Writing perfection is something we aspire to but never achieve so keep on writing on.
Rusty

Reviewed on April 19, 2007

I like the feelings in this composition titled, "Inadequate", and I know that You are a holder of a quill that came from the great EAGLE's wings.

I leave You with words of Master Aberjhani:
"... BECAUSE EVERY POET IS RIGHTFULLY ENTITLED TO HIS OR HER INDIVIDUAL PERSPECTIVE AND METHODOLOGY, EVERY POET’S VOICE IS A VALID AND VALUED ONE."

In admiration,


Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU

Reviewed on April 19, 2007
Karla,

First of all, you are NOT "inadequate"; you are as capable as anyone else here! I happen to love how you write; you just have to believe that and get past the "number of reviews" (something I have to learn as well). Writing is a learning process: we write, we rewrite, and in the process, we grow. Look how far you have come; your talents as a poet is impeccable: I could never be as good as you! You are a fantastic poet, and if people don't read or review you, so what. It's their loss. You have your words out there; one day someone'll will take notice and say, "WOW"!!

Karla, I know it isn't easy, but please don't throw your gift away. Everybody is hard on themselves, you aren't the only one. I am hard on myself every day when it comes to my stories; I am always striving to improve. It's hard, but if we want to become better at our craft, we must do this. Please keep on writing; your words are needed! Your words are important, even if you don't think so. Case closed.

(((HUGS))) and much love, your twin (and biggest fan!), Karen Lynn. :D

Reviewed by SaPAth AnANd
Reviewed on April 19, 2007
I don't think anyone have to beat themselves for feeling inadequate.Everyone is good in their own unique way.

Bom Bhole!
Roshan

Reviewed on April 19, 2007
There's no reason for it Karla, your poetry is beautiful and has grown by leaps and bounds.

Reviewed by George Carroll
Reviewed on April 19, 2007
Nothing inadequate in this fine piece of poetry depicting one's feelings and being too hard on oneself. You are a fine poet and when you write from the heart no poet can match you.


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