An the words that you didn't wrote will tiptoe down the stairs to go to sleep in the Muse's basket and be fresh tomorrow when your eyes open for a new poetic day.
Sleep well, we all are watching over.
Georg
When one can pick up the pen to write after a tiring day of work, writing is certainly in their blood and serves as a trusted friend and companion. Your poem is great--expressing the idea of putting the woes of the day to rest along with your tired body.
That you can write a poem after a ten hour work day shows intestinal fortitude! My, oh, my! What a wonderful write; you made the reader feel your exhaustion! Now go to bed and get some rest; you've earned it! :) Very well done; brava!
(((HUGS))) and much love, your twin, Karen Lynn. :D
Reviewed by Flying Fox Ted L Glines (Reader)
Reviewed on April 28, 2007
Neat way to put a tired day to bed. As always, a great write!
I know the feeling my friend, it's been a long week and a long day today, I've been helping a friend give a household shower at our church, had to cook for that, and been babysitting, while also helping my daughter with a remodeling project! It's been a long one, I too am about to retire for the day! Enjoyed this much!
Blessings,
Joyce Bowling
South Baltimore serves as the backdrop for this gripping story of three brothers leading very different lives but joined forever by the secrets of a painful family past.
A homonymless man writes shows what it's like to look up the laid he skirts when you’re lying prone(d) to the sidewalk, beer / joint / needle dangling from your hand /lips / arm.
Thank you.
Abdullahi
Take it easy!
Love Tinka
Chanti
Have another one tonight!
Woderful DREAms!
YOur words are inspiring!
Be SAFE!
Stay POsitive!
WArmly, WArrior Lady PURPLE Sheeeoox
With lurve,
Ron
randy
Love and Peace~
Kimmy~
Sleep well, we all are watching over.
Georg
That you can write a poem after a ten hour work day shows intestinal fortitude! My, oh, my! What a wonderful write; you made the reader feel your exhaustion! Now go to bed and get some rest; you've earned it! :) Very well done; brava!
(((HUGS))) and much love, your twin, Karen Lynn. :D
Ted
Thanks,
Dan
Blessings,
Joyce Bowling
Hugs, Laura