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If God Is Teasing, I Wish ...
by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner → (All Poetry by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner)
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My job, gone. Had a problem with the boss and other issues not getting resolved. Back to square one ...


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If God Is Teasing, I Wish

...He'd stop.  Enough is enough.
I'm tired of Him laughing
at my expense.  Troubles keep
wrapping themselves around my
feet; they tangle and trip me
up; I fall flat on my face.
It's getting harder to get
up after each plunge to the
dirt.  Does He enjoy playing
me the fool He thinks I am?

(c) 2007, Karla Dorman (5/12)


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Reviewed by HB Clayton
Reviewed on May 18, 2007
Counter Sued



Before my Maker

Awaiting final Judgement

With Allegations



I understand your frustration. I hope your situation works itself out. - HB

Reviewed on May 18, 2007
Alaways remember when God closes a door he opens up something better for you, I truly believe that is the case with you
God Bless
Michelle~

Reviewed by Spirit Warrior
Reviewed on May 16, 2007
Chin-up,Shoulders-Square,Close-Ranks,No-Enemy-Spare!
Your in the Lords Army!
No weapon formed against you shall prosper!
Your blaming the wrong god if you think your Creator does this.
satan is the god of this world. he is the one this poem should be focused on...notice how I have not capitalized anything to do with him?
Now, may the God of all Creation Bless your day!
p.s. shake the dust off your feet...now say Get thee beneath me satan!
And go check out The Dance of all Dances a poem posted yesterday it's sure to bring a :) to your face!

God Bless -Spirit Warrior

Reviewed by William Bonilla
Reviewed on May 13, 2007
Powerful statement in this outsnding write
Karla
Peace Be With You

Love & Peace
William

Reviewed by Randall Barfield
Reviewed on May 13, 2007
karla, how sad, i read all the others so that it would help me comment. i agree mostly with Jones, Palumbo, and Bowling, all who wrote below. i never think God teases, although i do think he has a great sense of humor. your case is certainly not about humor. get closer to God instead of doubting. as far as fools, i think He knows we all are! (to Him because He is so omnipotent, etc.) but then how He loves us, He who created us. do some networking immediately. i know something good and better is going to happen.

Reviewed by H. Lena Jones
Reviewed on May 13, 2007
Ah Karla, No God is not teasing...He's not a cruel God at all. He's a God of love. What you're experiencing is the devil at work, doing his best to make you think God doesn't care. It's time to put your foot down. Look the devil in the eyes and tell him ..."enough is enough, for it is written, God has promised never to leave me or forsake me. From now on whatever I do, I will do it to the glory of God." Now, ask God for the job He has for you. If there is something you particularly enjoy doing, Karla, ask God to reveal this situation. Be specific. Then listen for His promptings. Remember, God created you for a purpose. He did not create you to entertain Him. He's much bigger than that. Okay, enough said. :) Chin up...face the world with confidence and expect an amazing miracle.
Have you read the Trilogy "Conversations with God" by Neale Donald Walsch? The movie is also amazing.


God Bless
Peace and love
Lena

Happy Mother's Day

Reviewed by Felix Perry
Reviewed on May 13, 2007
I seem to see a connection to my recent poem on this subject and that is good for it shows that it has made you think and question the validity of laughing or not laughing at our troubles and woes.
Karla I do not make light of anyones troubles for when it comes to health, finances, lost jobs and even lost love I have experienced my fair share and I also felt rage, anger and dispair as each blow hit me over the past few years but...I still believe that in the grand scheme of things and in the total score card of life we have to look back and say each and every one of us that we are ahead of the game just to be alive and to express yes even the bad moments of our lifes.
Hugs
Fee

Reviewed by Michael LaSalle (Reader)
Reviewed on May 13, 2007
Hi karla, this is Powerful,
as well as heartbreakingly touching.
I feel your pain and I am sure many
people can relate, though I
think god is love, reality is the teaser.
please keep that talent flowing! mike



Reviewed by Barbara Smith
Reviewed on May 13, 2007
Karla, life is full of trials & tribulations...keep your chin up, I know you will make it through this! I know many of the happenings in my life that I thought were the WORST...turned out I was so blessed that it happened as it did. I'm praying all will be with you.

Reviewed by Art Hernandez
Reviewed on May 13, 2007
Life can throw some curve balls at us and even strike us out....yet there is always another inning....when one door closes, another one opens....

Keep your chin up ....

I know you can find a way to succeed...


Love and peace, and...


Happy Mother's Day...

Art Sun...

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Reviewed on May 13, 2007
I doubt if he think you a fool...I am sure it is to make things better at the end....HE has bigger plans for you sis...trust me!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by Sharon Lawson (Reader)
Reviewed on May 13, 2007
I really relate to this and I think many people will. Its that age-old question/debate of "How can a God of love allow this to happen?" We are subject to trials and tribulations because we are mere mortals, prone to decay, disease, etc. We have free-will and can make wrong choices. I have felt like this on numerous times in my life so far and I relate to your poem 100%!! It can be so difficult when all seems bleak. Sometimes I've felt God is not there, sometimes the opposite. We have to be brave and accept life presents challenges that can actually make us stronger people in the end :o)
Shaz X

Reviewed by Mary Patterson
Reviewed on May 13, 2007
Dear Karla ,,I'll KEEP you in my prayers .. God is there . Some times I think he gives us a lot to handle, but some how through faith, prayer and Gods love, it all works out.....M

Reviewed by Georg Mateos
Reviewed on May 13, 2007
Hello there my friend, good poem telling the Captain up there to just stop fooling around and make it for shore, but I don't want to hear that you feel depondent or ready to throw your arms up.
Whatever happens...no surrender.
Georg

Reviewed by Gloria Gay
Reviewed on May 12, 2007
Teasing can be playful or hurtful. This well accomplished poem gives the urgency of the hurtful type of teasing and coming from God, no less. But as always, next day something very nice happens and we have something to than Him for, the teasing all but forgotten - or at least that's what I hope!

Reviewed by Karen Palumbo
Reviewed on May 12, 2007
The trick is to never, ever give up! If God is teasing, then be defiant. Tell yourself you can do this, no matter how hard you must try. Remember the little train? I think I can, I think I can, I think I can,........I DID! and YOU WILL, have faith in yourself. You have done it before, now it is time to do it again........

Be safe,
Karen

Reviewed by Southern Comfort
Reviewed on May 12, 2007
Oh Sweet Stormy! This well expressed write, is one I can so relate to! GOD aint really pullin our strings, it's the free will gift HE gives to all, and some folks use that gift to make others, so damn racked with misery. YOU ARE BEAUTIFUL! YOU ARE LOVED! SC

Reviewed by Ed Matlack
Reviewed on May 12, 2007
As long as YOU know who and what you are, young lady, you will do the best you're supposed too...Rufuz loves you and so we all...strength, positive thought, & Peace, Ed

Reviewed on May 12, 2007
Karla~

It seems unfair that some people have blessings untold while we seem to struggle, barely getting by. I know it is wrong to be jealous of others, but sometimes we can't help ourselves, especially when times are hard, as they seem to be now. Don't give up hope; I haven't. Satan wants you to give up (me, too), when we are down, his attacks are the worst. This is when we need to lean on God, ask for His guidance. He will never forsake us; He never has, He never will. I have learned to lean on that; you need to do this too. I will pray hard for you, for a miraculous breakthrough; this can't go on forever! Please keep the faith for me and for others who care. We love you, I most of all!

Powerful, heartrending cry of "Enough is Enough!" that touches the soul; God hears your cries. Remember that.

(((HUGS))) and much love, your twin sister, Karen Lynn. :( >Tears! <

Reviewed by Larry Lounsbury
Reviewed on May 12, 2007
Maybe there is a pot of gold at the end of your rainbow.

Reviewed by Susan Sonnen
Reviewed on May 12, 2007
Sweetie, I know this feeling of despair too well myself. And I know that you know that things always get better. Stay strong...we will lift you up in prayer...wait for the blessings to shower down on you!

Reviewed by Joyce Bowling
Reviewed on May 12, 2007
My dear Karla, be steadfast and pray on...despite the tricks of the obsticles that life has a way of throwing at you. Don't let the enemy attack your mind...he has a way of doing this when we are at a low point. Be determined and wait on God, believe with all your heart, He will make a way, and has a way of taking a bad situation and working it out and turning it into good! Be patient and wait on Him, for He is an on time God! I have found just when I didn't think I could bear a situation or stand anymore, He always comes through! You're in my prayers dear friend!
Blessings,
Joyce Bowling


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