What the Thunder Said (poem) by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner on AuthorsDen

Reviewed on May 23, 2007

great short creation here. i like it. i hope He never stops! how the thunder of our childhood made us jump and scream! remember?

Reviewed by OnepoetGem *the Poetic Rapper

Reviewed on May 22, 2007

my dear Karla I'm sure the Lord would say, "nothing personal, just business."

Reviewed by Joyce Bowling

Reviewed on May 22, 2007

Great write my friend, I don't know if many will ever learn to listen to the Lord, He has tried for many years to get the attention of many, but they chose to turn a deaf ear! Clever write my friend, enjoyed!
Blessings,
Joyce B.

Reviewed by Michelle Kidwell Power In The Pen

Reviewed on May 22, 2007

I often find inspiration in book titles, keep it up and be blessed
God Bless
Michelle~

Reviewed by H. Lena Jones

Reviewed on May 22, 2007

Yeah, I wonder too, Karla. This is so very clever. Excellent!

Much love
Lena

Reviewed by Felix Perry

Reviewed on May 22, 2007

Interesting thoughts and questions here and when a poem makes one ponder such delicious mysteries it must be good.

Fee

Reviewed by Jeanette Cooper

Reviewed on May 22, 2007

Dear God, give Karla a break,and send me some of her rain. Give the storms a sleeping pill, though.

Nice poem, Karla, and I suppose He does speak to us in many different ways.

Reviewed by Laura Mayer (Reader)

Reviewed on May 22, 2007

Good message Karla!
Hugs, Laura

Reviewed by E. Richardson

Reviewed on May 22, 2007

excellent! Compact and powerful this is! Your use of a five seven five format is perfect for this piece...

Reviewed by Dale Clark

Reviewed on May 22, 2007

Yes thunder speaks, loudly Karen!
Great write.

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes

Reviewed on May 22, 2007

Oh my this says alot!!

Thanks Karla!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by E T Waldron

Reviewed on May 22, 2007

It's because we don't listen that the world is q mess.Superb poem Karla!

Love,
Eileen

Reviewed by Chantilly Lace (Reader)

Reviewed on May 22, 2007

Excellent pen...Hugsssss

Reviewed by Barbara Smith

Reviewed on May 22, 2007

Karla, we need to listen for God's voice and take in every word He says for we would have a lot better world to live in. This is such a nice inspiring message.

Reviewed by D Johnson

Reviewed on May 22, 2007

I wonder to...well stated,

thanks,
Dan

Reviewed by Regis Auffray

Reviewed on May 22, 2007

I think we have given up listening. Look at the state of the world. Thank you, Karla. Amour et paix, ton ami de la C-B, Canada,

Regis

Reviewed by Spirit Warrior

Reviewed on May 22, 2007

Exellent my dear...Exellent!

God Bless -Spirit Warrior

Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado

Reviewed on May 22, 2007

Karla,

The title drew me in; what greeted me was a wonderful poem about heeding the Voice of God. Excellent Message in this one; very well penned, Karla! BRAVA! Love the graphic; fits the poem perfectly!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your twin sister, Karen Lynn. :D

Reviewed by Richard Cederberg

Reviewed on May 22, 2007

Karla ...
I love these kinds of spiritual insights. So many in this world desperately need ears attuned to what the Most High is saying before they can change. Blessings to you dear heart. Stand strong and stay the course. Your friend in SoCal.

Light and Wisdom ...