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Hard Question
by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner → (All Poetry by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner)
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To those who perished in the June, 2007 flooding in Haltom City and Gainsville, Texas, and their loved ones.

Over 10 inches of rain fell in two and a half hours in these two communities, decimating homes and lives: five people lost so far, including two little girls; more people missing.

When's enough ENOUGH??


S A D N E S S puddles 'round
my feet as I read
the morning news:  storm
and flood take their toll.
Little girls should not
drown; all hope should not
float downstream, only
to CRASH! into more
heartache as they pick
up what's left of their
lives; those along the
floodplain should not have
to fight high water
each time it rains ... no
easy answer to
the hard question of:
when's enough ENOUGH???

(c) 2007, Karla Dorman (6/19)

 

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 Reviews of "Hard Question"
Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Reviewed on June 22, 2007
Powerful offering Karla!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan
Reviewed on June 21, 2007
What a powerfully written statement in the face of a tradgedy-so well penned

Reviewed by Kathryn Collins (Reader)
Reviewed on June 20, 2007
Dear Karla,

S A D N E S S puddles 'round
my feet

what a way to draw us to your poem, which is a heartbreaker. Who can explain?

love,
Kathy

Reviewed by Mr. Ed
Reviewed on June 20, 2007
Little girls should not
drown; all hope should not
float downstream

Truly truly heartbreaking, Karla.

Reviewed by Kimmy Van Kooten
Reviewed on June 20, 2007
Why we write...to find peace within and scribe our thoughts away for others to feel the release, the love, the compassion of tender thoughts, the healing...
Excellent write, Karla... on a very sad occurence.No, little girls should not drown...
Love and Peace~
Kimmy~

Reviewed by George Thompson
Reviewed on June 20, 2007
Karla,
I think we have reached that point, but we are not in charge; there IS a higher power that controls all.

George

Reviewed on June 19, 2007
My prayres are with you all, thank you for sharing, and please let me know whats going on, keep writing and be blessed in the writing
God Bless
Michelle~

Reviewed on June 19, 2007
Oh Karla, this is so heart-wrenching, sometimes we just have to ask why...

Reindeer

Reviewed by Joyce Bowling
Reviewed on June 19, 2007
An excellent write my friend, from the heart of a caring person. Life is hard to understand, but I have learned not to question...but pray for understanding. I pray for the comfort for those who have lost so much. As that old hymn states, we will understand in the sweet by and by...my heart aches for their loss also...so sad.
Blessings,
Joyce B.

Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on June 19, 2007
Excellent poem Karla, but be careful questioning Creator. No one is more compassionate than He is,these are the times we show our faith, in Him...

Reviewed by Rafiriio Daniels
Reviewed on June 19, 2007
I greatly enjoyed this offering of work!! This will keep poetry alive!!!!

Reviewed by Karen Palumbo
Reviewed on June 19, 2007
Another well written, heartfelt piece my friend! My veterinarian works in Denison, lives in Sherman, but other there also live in Gainsville. Tried calling and finally got through about 2pm. A couple of friends in Gainsville, met them while RVing up at Lake Texoma. Anything they need let us know. But you are right, ENOUGH ALL READY!!Want to go up there and lend a hand, but my vet says not yet, do not want a flood of people comeing in until the bulk of the cleanup is done. For now I pray......

Be safe,
Karen

Reviewed on June 19, 2007
Stunning work Karla about such an awful loss.

Reviewed by Rhonda Galizia
Reviewed on June 19, 2007
Excellent write, Karla! Your compassion and journalistic skill combine, only to deliver an even harder question: Are we ready, should it be us?

I loudly reiterate the Truth, which Richard so perfectly declared: we must all be prepared now, at any given moment.

One day it shall all make sense...meanwhile, my heart weeps with yours. Love& Hugs & Prayers, Rhonda

Please add prayers for the families of 9 firefighters who lost their lives saving others, in Charleston SC. Our son, Nick, (the Master Architect), lives & works there...it is dreadful, and the worst loss of firefighters in our history - except for 9-11 :(

Reviewed by Walt Hardester
Reviewed on June 19, 2007
Karla,
Mother nature keeps trying to tell us...but we still ain't a payin her no mind

Walt

Reviewed by Richard Cederberg
Reviewed on June 19, 2007
The voice of one crying out in the wilderness. Dear Karla, the birth pangs are getting closer and closer together. Stand Strong and keep your eyes on the goal!
Blessings ...
Richard

Reviewed by Nicky Goodman
Reviewed on June 19, 2007
Hi Karla - very powerful short poem, lots of feeling to this and the ending, plenty to think about - enjoyed your poem very much - Nicky x

Reviewed by Spirit Warrior
Reviewed on June 19, 2007
Every
Nation
Our
Uncomprehendable
God
Harvests
!
God Bless,
God Speed,

~Spirit Warrior

Reviewed by Sue Hess
Reviewed on June 19, 2007
karla, your poetry is always so well written but it always carries a message and the combination of the two things are so important. i always read what you write

Reviewed on June 19, 2007
Heartbreaking; that's what it is! I wonder, too, why God allows this to happen. It's like He is mad at Texas: too much rain or none. No happy medium. Glad it wasn't here; but still, it was scary hearing about it and seeing the videos on tv! Just up the road from us; tooo close for comfort! My heart goes out to the people in Haltom City and Gainesville, Texas; may God be with them as they try to put their lives back together!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your twin, Karen Lynn. :( >tears! <

Reviewed by D Johnson
Reviewed on June 19, 2007
Good question and really good write.

Peace,
Dan


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