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Until
by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner → (All Poetry by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner)
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A rant. A woman's comments set this one off.

... Until you have spent a
day in my shoes, do not
judge.  Just because I do
not look like you, act like
you, walk like you does not
give you the right to speak
without thinking.  I was
right there while you shot off
your mouth, hitting me with
bullets, effectively
killing me.  You'd like to
keep us hidden away,
the handicapped.  I could
hear it in your voice and
see it in words of hate.
Do you think we enjoy
being like this?  Do you
think we purposely get
in your way just to make
your life miserable?
Until you have spent a
day in my shoes, shut UP.

(c) 2007, Karla Dorman (6/23)


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 Reviews of "Until"
Reviewed by Joyce Bowling
Reviewed on July 17, 2007
Bravo my friend! I agree with the cliche...until you've walked a mile in my shoes...hurts me to see people judge others. According the bible we are not supposed to judge others, He says we will be judged as we've judged...can you imagine some people are going to be prosecuted to the fullest exent...I believe that somewhere in this life or at the end of this road we call life those that have taunted, teased, and ridiculed will reap what they have sewn with their sharp tongues and daggers of ignorance! I was taught to respect everybody for who they are! Never to pass judgement, never to tease, but treat others as I desired to be treated! What happened to respect? This kind of attitude ticks me off royaly! No one is perfect, and those who think they are, boy have they got a rude awakening! Write on dear friend and you tell em!
Blessings,
Joyce B.

Reviewed by jude forese
Reviewed on June 24, 2007
just think of the many who see you as you are, a human being and accept you as so ... they outweigh the ones who are the truly handicapped ...

Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan
Reviewed on June 24, 2007
good for you-well written words that go deep

Reviewed by Karen Palumbo
Reviewed on June 24, 2007
Good going Karla! I applaud you for speaking up and out! Those that live in glass bubbles with be in for a real shock when the glass bubble burst. Then where will they be?? Proud of you!

Be safe,
Karen

Reviewed by K. Mulroney
Reviewed on June 24, 2007
Some people should be born without a mouth to go with the empty head. Great write Karla!

Reviewed by Mary Patterson
Reviewed on June 24, 2007
A POWERFUL WRITE...One never knows what an affliction is really like till they live it in one way or another........M

Reviewed by Marguerite Lemoine
Reviewed on June 23, 2007
Good Karla; Keep telling them; Some people just don't have good sense. Marguerite

Reviewed by Chantilly Lace (Reader)
Reviewed on June 23, 2007
I love this Karla..well done...HUgssssss

Reviewed on June 23, 2007
It makes me angry when I hear thoughtless comments, but you know what it reminds me of just who the really "handicapped" person is, and they have the worst kind of "Disability" the one that stops them from having common sense, rant on.
God Bless
Michelle~

Reviewed by Connie Faust
Reviewed on June 23, 2007
Jesus handled it with these words, "Father, forgive them, for they know not what they do." He understands, Karla, and will always be there to help you go on in spite of the ignorant ones.
And in His eyes, you're not handicapped; you are absolutely wonderful and whole, one of His dear children. "Nothing is able to separate us from the love of God in Christ Jesus!

Love ya much,
Connie

Reviewed by J M (Reader)
Reviewed on June 23, 2007
We should never judge unless we be judged. I bought a papaya never bought one before one was sliced it was excellent. But the other one I call the $4.59 lesson on fruits expression. I picked the only one green firm in the ben about 12 others looked rotten. Got it home yep you guessed it was green inside too the Lord taught me we can never judge fruit or others for sight is not a good expression the heart of the matter is what counts. Wonderful message Karla....

Blessings & Love & Hugs
Josie

Reviewed by Jibril Mohamed
Reviewed on June 23, 2007
You hit back with a strong poem Karla. It is unfair for someone to tell you that you made their lives miserable. It is unfortunate for such things to continue. People should realise that DISABILITY IS NOT INABILTY. It is not by choice either.

Thank you Karla.

Jibril

Reviewed by Randall Barfield
Reviewed on June 23, 2007
ggggrrrreeeeaaaatttt!!!! rant or is it a rant? i agree totally, but...one thing...I wear size 11. a hug

Reviewed by Felix Perry
Reviewed on June 23, 2007
I agree there is a lot of people out there that have nothing better to do and not enough sense to realize handicapped play an essential part in this world, but there are also a lot of caring loving people who reach out a hand and a smile to help us get along.


Fee

Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on June 23, 2007
That's telling her! God spare us having to know the kind of person who is so insensitive.and cruel!

Reviewed by George Thompson
Reviewed on June 23, 2007
There ARE some very under-educated people living in this world. Their position in life seems to be hurting others with no cares except their own. Too bad. This is an excellent read!

George

Reviewed by Kate Clifford (Reader)
Reviewed on June 23, 2007
People like that are just not worth your time. You my dear lady will continue to excel in this lifetime just because of the person you are and you know this is true.......so who ever could behave in that manner just isn't worth you time.

Reviewed by Theresa curnow (Reader)
Reviewed on June 23, 2007
Well done Karen and good write. Your are correct in what you say. People don't really understand at all. Blessings and peace to you, love Theresa.

Reviewed by Ch'erie de Perrot
Reviewed on June 23, 2007
I like Yosemite Sam's approach to things, with his six pack, and thunderous raving....SHUDUP SHUTTING UP..
I see it everyday in my Son's eye's, I am limited to how much gadding around I can do too, so I can empathize in part, though I know your moccies are alot bigger by far, Love you much, both of you, always in my heart.
Hugs and Much lovexxxxxx((((())))))Ch'erie

Reviewed by Walt Hardester
Reviewed on June 23, 2007
Karla,
the really sad thing here is ...if INSIDE THEIR HEADS, people could see ...they would see just how much more f**ked up they are than we

Walt

Reviewed on June 23, 2007
People have no clue how it is to be "in our shoes". I'd love to see anyone who ISN'T disabled spend a day, no a week, no a YEAR in a wheelchair, or walk with the aid of a cane, walker, or crutches, or walk with blindfolds over their eyes or wear earmuffs so they can't hear well. Only then will they know what it is truly like to be handicapped. I think all public places (schools, churches, work environments) should have a "disability awareness" course; that would really change their minds, open their eyes. That's the problem: people do NOT know what it's like, and they'd rather see us hidden away. Sad. We are only trying to better ourselves; give us a chance, please, and please look beyond our exterior! We are more like you than you may realize! Very powerful rant, I hear you! BRAVA, extremely well done!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your twin, Karen Lynn. :(

Reviewed by Mr. Ed
Reviewed on June 23, 2007
Until you have spent a
day in my shoes, shut UP.

Very sage advice for us all; if only many would listen.


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