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Here Comes the Sun!
by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner → (All Poetry by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner)
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Strangeness in the sky; a
ball of light hanging on
an invisible thread.  Is
it a firework?  Nearly
July ... an explosion?
No big bang -- U.F.O,
perhaps??  God forbid.  No --
the sun, the one we've not
seen -- how do you do?  Nice
to see you.  Top of the
morning to -- alas, not
to last, more wet in the
forecast.  Still:  a break is
a break is a break.  We'll
take any we can get,
thankyewverymuch.  Been
a while since I've seen your
smiling face.  Welcome back! 

(c) 2007, Karla Dorman (6/29) 


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 Reviews of "Here Comes the Sun!"
Reviewed by Randall Barfield
Reviewed on June 30, 2007
i truly enjoy your high degree of literacy. cute job here. keep going and my best wishes.

Reviewed by Susan de Vegter
Reviewed on June 30, 2007
Hello Moster Sun...this is great news for Texas is huge and has a lot of land for water to nourish but you all have had enough for a whie. Bask in the healing rays karla.
Love,
Susan

Reviewed by Mary Patterson
Reviewed on June 30, 2007
Great message and images Karla.. Many thanks for you kind words.......M

Reviewed by Joyce Bowling
Reviewed on June 30, 2007
A wonderful write with powerful imagery, loved how you described the sun hanging by an invisible thread! Glad you got some sunshine and a little break! Enjoyed!
Blessings,
Joyce B.

Reviewed on June 29, 2007
Excellent write here, glad you are finally getting some sunshine
God Bless
Michelle~

Reviewed by Ed Matlack
Reviewed on June 29, 2007
Remember the sun block...ed

Reviewed by Karen Palumbo
Reviewed on June 29, 2007
A perfect delight! Good to see the sun if for only a short while, brought lots of smiles......

Be safe,
Karen

Reviewed by Ron (sketchman) Axelson (Reader)
Reviewed on June 29, 2007
I know you all have had a ruff time in big T.
Your friend......

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Reviewed on June 29, 2007
Happy to know you feel sunny ...and that the sun is back today!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan
Reviewed on June 29, 2007
yeah!!! finally, am happy for you

Reviewed by Walt Hardester
Reviewed on June 29, 2007
Ditto Ed's post

Here comes the sun...do do do do do

here comes the sun do do do do do

it's allright
them Beatles were sumpin else



Walt

Reviewed by D Johnson
Reviewed on June 29, 2007
Well Karla, we got your rain on the North Oregon Coast today, tomorrow and the day after. Enjoy the sunshine...

Peace,
Dan

Reviewed by Richard Cederberg
Reviewed on June 29, 2007
I can visualize your wide-eyed incredulity viewing the sun after what Texas has endured lately. Here we are officially in a drought. Dear Karla, you are like a poetic weather person. (-: Enjoy el sol for as long as he is smiling on you. Blessings ...
Richard

Reviewed by George Thompson
Reviewed on June 29, 2007
Newsy and funny. I liked it very much.

George

Reviewed by john zimmerman
Reviewed on June 29, 2007
been a little cloudy down your way?

up in da nord, here too much sun too little rain had a big storm system come through -- rain all around -- none in O-Sha-Wa

good write k,j,

love and hufs

john+

Reviewed on June 29, 2007
LOL at Ed below; he's too f u n n y!! LOL

Keep on wishing for ol' Mister Sun; in a few months, we will be CRYING for rain or cooler temps; it N E V E R fails! LOL Very cute poem; enjoyed much~ Very well done; brava, Karla!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your twin, Karen Lynn. :D

Reviewed by Mr. Ed
Reviewed on June 29, 2007
Sun, sun, sun, here it comes...
Sun, sun, sun, here it comes...
Sun, sun, sun, here it comes...
Sun, sun, sun, here it comes...
Sun, sun, sun, here it comes...

I love that song!


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