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Too Much Of A Good Thing
by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner → (All Poetry by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner)
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Rain, rain, go aWAY..............

Meandering with no place
to call home, the low that will
not die lives in nightmare for

those caught in the deluge day
after day.  Independence
Day dependant on whether:

Will it rain?  More than likely.
Last year, burning bans dwindled
blooms and bombs bursting in air;

this year, dampness may fizzle
sparks before ignition.  June
continues into July

and shows no signs of leaving.
Enough, already:  too much
of a good thing, all this wet -----

(c) 2007, Karla Dorman (7/1)


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 Reviews of "Too Much Of A Good Thing"
Reviewed by Walt Hardester
Reviewed on July 5, 2007
Get your coat and grab your hat
leave your wories on the doorstep
just direct your feet
to the SUNNY side of the street

Walt

Reviewed by Mary Patterson
Reviewed on July 5, 2007
It looks like you had another wet day in Texas.. We got rain also, but it went away in the late afternoon. We had a cookout and went to the fireworks. Hope it stops soon for all of you.. You have had your share and more.........M

Reviewed by Joyce Bowling
Reviewed on July 3, 2007
Watched the news this morning, saw where there are those that were rowing boats through the water...my heart goes out to you guys, I hope the rain will cease to a normal rainfall...glad I didn't see you and Karen in one of those boats. Keeping positive thoughts for the sun to shine down on you my friend!
Blessings,
Joyce B.

Reviewed by Georg Mateos
Reviewed on July 3, 2007
It is not so much sun here in Sweden, rain with all the trimmings, but they assure us that better times are coming.
They never said when.
Cheer up!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Georg

Reviewed by Barbara Terry
Reviewed on July 3, 2007
I have been reading about the flooding there, Karla, and I am praying that you have some sun really soon. I hope your 4th of July is a good one. Thank you for sharing.

May the Lord Jesus bless you, and those whom you love, and be with you always, and at your side constantly. With much love in my heart, joy to the world, peace on earth, & ((((((((((MANY WONDERFUL SISTERLY HUGGGGSSSS)))))))))), sister Barbie

Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on July 2, 2007
I pray you get some sun soon maybe the 4th, whatever, please have some fun;-)!

Reviewed by Dawn Richerson
Reviewed on July 2, 2007
sun for independence day, queen of the weather writes. thanks for the welcome back. and happy happy birthday to you and Karen btw... know I'm a few days behind. Dawn

Reviewed by jude forese
Reviewed on July 2, 2007
if the weather could only have a balnaced heart ..

Reviewed by Gloria Gay
Reviewed on July 2, 2007
Another winner, Karla. You made me feel the rain even on a hot and dry summer day.

Reviewed on July 2, 2007
We have three digit temps coming up a little rain here in California would be nice
God Bless
Michelle~

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Reviewed on July 2, 2007
Kinda know the WET feeling...been raining ALOT on this side too!!

I think Mother Nature also gets PMS....lol!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by Angel God is Love
Reviewed on July 2, 2007
It sure is dry here and we have dry heat 112-116 here in the summer. I cannot wait tell we get rain. Wishing you a Happy and safe 4th of July. Thanks for your write.
Hugs Angela

Reviewed by Sage Sweetwater
Reviewed on July 2, 2007
Nature's diaper needs changing...who'll volunteer...watermelon-dipped quill and a pound of Grandma's Ol' fashioned potato salad to you two, Karla and Karen...Happy July 4th under the umbrella...be safe Special K Twins...

Sage

Reviewed on July 2, 2007
Karla, What is that saying about greener grass,etc.?? We are praying for rain as mother nature teases us with short sprinkles which dry up before they almost touch the ground. Oh wet where is thy sting. Luv and hugs <Mikii>

Reviewed by Sue Hess
Reviewed on July 2, 2007
its pretty dry here now but i heard we got a lot of rain while i was in florida. i hope your fourth is not ruined. great writing as usual karla

Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan
Reviewed on July 2, 2007
and it is so hot and dry here in Utah the state is having terrible fire problems-too bad we can't trade!~

Reviewed by D Johnson
Reviewed on July 2, 2007
Overcast on the North Oregon Coast...but hot weather (mid 70's) due Tuesday thru Friday. I wish you well.

Peace,
Dan

Reviewed by Kate Burnside
Reviewed on July 2, 2007
Can only imagine what this is like for you, Karla. As for me, I am altogether moody if the sun doesn't shine, like being sealed in concrete. So good job I am not your Job's comforter out there.

... Anecdotally, Glastonbury Festival was the total mudbath it always is over here a couple of weeks' ago... I heard of one person who bought up 3500 pairs of wellies at £4 a pair and sold them on site for £75 a pair... Guess the sun was shining for HIM at any rate!!

Just an idea... Perhaps, in your case, it might be snorkel and flippers... LOL and keep sailing, Kate xx

Reviewed on July 2, 2007
The weather pattern we've been in HAS been very frustrating; a lot of celebrations are going to be threatened if this stubborn low doesn't go aWAY! NOT good; I'd rather see REAL fireworks, NOT nature's fireworks, ya know?? Remember 1969?? JEEEZ! Don't NEED a repeat performance! Very well penned; brava!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your twin, Karen Lynn. :(

Reviewed by Felix Perry
Reviewed on July 2, 2007
Still cold and rainy up here in the North but we did get in a three day folk festival without getting drowned so not complaining too much. LOL

Fee


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