The Gathering Darkness (poem) by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner on AuthorsDen

Reviewed on July 25, 2007

...and as sweet as honey from the hive. I think the design of life is to keep us on our toes, or, at least, it seems at times.
Love,
Susan

Reviewed by Victor Buhagiar (Reader)

Reviewed on July 25, 2007

Very much actual I suppose. There's choas with the weather around this world. Victor

Reviewed by ~ Holly Harbridge (Reader)

Reviewed on July 25, 2007

Excellent writing Karla, love Holly

Reviewed by Jeanette Cooper

Reviewed on July 25, 2007

You've painted a beautiful picture with images of a period in history that lingers only through words written such as yours.

Reviewed by Mr. Ed

Reviewed on July 25, 2007

It surely can, but glad to hear yours is looking brighter and warmer!

Reviewed by Joyce Bowling

Reviewed on July 25, 2007

Wow, a powerful write with a clear and strong voice coming through the outstanding imagery in this one Karla! Alive with sensual images my friend! Enjoyed!
Blessings,
Joyce B.

Reviewed by Rose Rideout

Reviewed on July 25, 2007

It is unfortunate Karla but as time goes by our food supply from nature will slowly dwindle. a wonderful write. Thank you for sharing.

Rose

Reviewed by Azrael Raven (Reader)

Reviewed on July 25, 2007

powerful imagry, forcefuly written I enjoyed this very much I especially liked the ending, quite evocative

Reviewed by Felix Perry

Reviewed on July 25, 2007

Well done, as man ever encroaches on the land of the Innuit the caribou herds like the bison and other great life providing sources of food are dwindling...this write captures the spirit of that loss.

Fee

Reviewed by Georg Mateos

Reviewed on July 25, 2007

Old Medicine Man said that when Brother Caribou is gone...it will be time for Brother Hunger come to stay with us.
Georg

Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan

Reviewed on July 24, 2007

i like this-a lot is delivered in this write

Reviewed by George Thompson

Reviewed on July 24, 2007

Excellent write, Karla. You just keep writing the best and all your works are lyrical in nature. Well done!

George

Reviewed by J. Allen Wilson

Reviewed on July 24, 2007

This is a really good write Karla...well done

Allen

Reviewed by Dawn Richerson

Reviewed on July 24, 2007

oh, what a treasure, Karla. I remember your northern lights writes so vividly and this one is right up there! excellent imagery and effect. Dawn

Reviewed by Karen Palumbo

Reviewed on July 24, 2007

Ah! You certainly have that right, much insight in this one.....

Be safe,
Karen

Reviewed by Sara Coslett

Reviewed on July 24, 2007

Your last line tells it all. So I guess the goal is to be prepared for the worst. This way when something warm comes your way, you'll really appreciate it. ~ Sara

Reviewed by Ron (sketchman) Axelson (Reader)

Reviewed on July 24, 2007

Well, it is said, life is what we make it
but I don't go along with all of that..
Other lives can make it hard on one.
YF...with love,
Ron

Reviewed by Mary Patterson

Reviewed on July 24, 2007

Life can be so very cold sometimes,, but then comes the sun!........M

Reviewed by Walt Hardester

Reviewed on July 24, 2007

Starving and still relying on wits alone.

Brave warrior....I saltue you

Walt

Reviewed by Phillip William Allen

Reviewed on July 24, 2007

Could vison this with ease. Well penned