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Hurricane Dean: Damned if You Do, Damned if You Don't
by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner → (All Poetry by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner)
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The cone of uncertainty widens ... Dean could be a dangerous Cat 5 storm when it slams into the Caribbean and emerges into the Gulf. Texas? Mexico?

" ... This was the part he hated
about his job: if he was
wrong, even if he were right,
people would die. ...."


He didn't need to scan the
weather maps to know trouble
was brewing.  All signs pointed
to a disaster in the
making.  Besides, old bones told

all he needed to know:  it
would be bad, this runaway
freight train of a storm.  Now how
to plot it:  who would be stuck
on the tracks, who would be missed?

This was the part he hated
about his job:  if he was
wrong, even if he were right,
people would die.  He sighed
and went back to reading the maps.

(c) 2007, Karla Dorman (8/17)

  

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 Reviews of "Hurricane Dean: Damned if You Do, Damned if You Don't"
Reviewed by Regis Auffray
Reviewed on August 21, 2007
I would not want to be a weatherforecaster in the face of such a storm. Thank you, Karla. Be well. Amour et paix,

Regis

Reviewed by Myles Saulibio
Reviewed on August 20, 2007
It's like the crucible of leadership- we'll be damned if we do and damned if we don't do. I guess that is why the various computer models at least offer some form of mitigated risk taking.

Aloha,
Myles

Reviewed by Randall Barfield
Reviewed on August 19, 2007
And now it's here! hope it does far less damage than we suppose. thanks for sharing.

Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on August 19, 2007
You have such keen insight Karla! Excellent poem. I'm praying hard that this storm will dissipate before it reaches Texas, or any other place. Be hopeful !

Love,
Eileen

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Reviewed on August 19, 2007
I am glad this is NOT my job!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by Georg Mateos
Reviewed on August 19, 2007
Meteorologist are like modern weather profet, but when it comes to hurricanes they are as powerless at the people that are giving the warning of an impeding earthquake.
They say that the President will come 100% to Texas aid (no surprises there), what about New Orleans, Baton Rouge and the rest?
Georg

Reviewed by William Bonilla
Reviewed on August 18, 2007
Powerful and informative write Karla
Thaks for sharing
Peace my friend

Love
William

Reviewed by Michael Guy
Reviewed on August 18, 2007
I wouldn't want to be a meteorologist at NHC since 2004. The pressure of forecasting the 2005 season alone would kill the ordinary guy. Now here we go again after 1 season off (2006) -- you capture that dilema well in the title alone. As soon as we hit peak season, the first serious hurricane blows up into a monster and the waters are warmer and warmer each year. Thanks for bringing the forecasters plight to us, I too think it is almost a thankless job for them UNLESS they can be sure they are saving lives!
will be reading, michael

Reviewed by Kate Clifford (Reader)
Reviewed on August 18, 2007
It would not be easy to be in that position and you have brought this insight to us the readers.

Reviewed by Theresa Koch
Reviewed on August 18, 2007
Heartfelt great poetry!

Reviewed by Elizabeth Price
Reviewed on August 18, 2007
I agree with Richard also. I felt like I was staring into the fury. Excellent. Liz

Reviewed on August 18, 2007
Wow as always Karla this is an amazing write
God Bless
Michelle~

Reviewed by Victor Buhagiar (Reader)
Reviewed on August 18, 2007
I agree with Richard. Things seem to be moving towards a finality that will end us all. I try not to be pessimistic. I don't claim I know when. I only know it's getting too near dfor comfort. Victor

Reviewed by Richard Cederberg
Reviewed on August 18, 2007
You capture the moment well here dear Karla.

My gosh ... I read this morning that a volcano in Alaska is about ready to seriously explode; they've even warned the airlines. I am sure that we are seeing and experiencing the 'birth pangs' written about in Scripture now. I really have no doubt anymore! Superb write from the heart of a truly caring and empathetic woman. Blessings to you ...
Richard

Reviewed by Joyce Bowling
Reviewed on August 18, 2007
A powerful write my friend...a different view...hadn't really thought of from this angel...but your write makes one stop and think, very profound indeed! Well done my friend, hope all is well!
Blessings,
Joyce B.

Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan
Reviewed on August 18, 2007
a different way to look at things-i like it-like all the many facetts of our mine disaster-the possible consequences of decisions made and the way things are reported-enjoyed the write

Reviewed by Ed Matlack
Reviewed on August 18, 2007
Earlier this year you were asking whether there was to be a summer...now that summer is here you worry about a storm that is part and parcel of the summer...you can't be satisfied can ya...LOL? e

Reviewed by Sara Coslett
Reviewed on August 18, 2007
You can only try to warn people. Think about how many people would have died in New Orleans if they hadn't evacuated. Lots more. So ultimately, it is up to the people to decide to whether they want to get out of the way or not. ~ Sara

Reviewed by Jeanette Cooper
Reviewed on August 18, 2007
Interesting poem. I like the way you compare a storm to a runaway freight train. That's a great (and terrible) image.

Reviewed by Jill Eisnaugle
Reviewed on August 18, 2007
Karla,
No one is praying that Dean goes into Mexico more than I am, for sure, sitting here in Galveston County, 1,000 feet from the water, as the Houston area prepares. If Galveston calls for an evacuation, it will likely be Monday and our community will follow, shortly thereafter. All we can do now is sit and wait. Whatever will be, will be. We have our plan fairly well finalized, should we have to go. Let's all hope this isn't another Katrina. Governor Perry, our local mayors and city managers have a hard job and a tough call, indeed. I have faith in their ability to keep us informed though. I will say that we're already starting to have a gas crunch here in the mainland areas, 10 miles inland from the coastal area of Galveston. Finding water, fuel, generators, and plywood is getting harder all the time, but at least our residents are taking the threat seriously. We're preparing; that's all we can do.

Hugs and Love,
Jill.......the nervous Gulf Coast Texan, praying the storm misses our state and the U.S. Mainland.

Reviewed on August 18, 2007
I pray Dean won't turn into another Katrina; we don't need any more disasters! And Texas has had far too much rain! We needed the rain, but this is getting rediculous! God help us! Powerful, unsettling poetry; very well penned! BRAVA, Karla!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your twin, Karen Lynn. :( >tears! <

Reviewed by Rose Rideout
Reviewed on August 18, 2007
Wouldn't take his job for a million dollars. Lets all pray that it can't be as bad as Katrina. Thank you Karla for your words.
Newfie Hugs, Rose

Reviewed by Mr. Ed
Reviewed on August 18, 2007
Don't envy his job at all, and I pray Dean won't be another Katrina.


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