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Breakthrough
by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner → (All Poetry by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner)
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Breaking up and OUT! :)


' Breakthrough '

Those that live in glass
houses shouldn't throw
stones, they say.  B r i t t l e
blue'd skies, as hard as
the ceiling, reflect
the heat back into
eyes glaz'd by the sun.
No break to shatter
[[[mediocrity]]] ----------

O, to have a rock.

(c) 2007, Karla Dorman (8/21)

  

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 Reviews of "Breakthrough"
Reviewed by George Thompson
Reviewed on August 22, 2007
Other people are good at throwing stones; it takes their minds off their own problems==for a while.

George

Reviewed by Jerry Engler
Reviewed on August 22, 2007
Loved the humor of the parody, Karla. Give me a pile of stones, too, please. I'll start by throwing them at the sky to see if the weather changes first, but mostly just to see who they land on. Then I can throw more rocks at them, break them out of their moods. But what if one lands on me?...Jerry

Reviewed by Art Hernandez
Reviewed on August 22, 2007
Nice, Karla...breaking though the ...medicrity...seems we don't have the stone neccessary to accomplish this...well maybe we do...

nice work...

Art Sun...

Reviewed by Rose Rideout
Reviewed on August 22, 2007
I agree with Felix the glass should be plexiglass and then we can throw when we want, a great write Karla, thank you.
Newfie Hugs, Rose

Reviewed by Kathryn Collins (Reader)
Reviewed on August 22, 2007
Karla,

O, to have a rock. (from inside or out?)

love this,
Kathy

Reviewed by Karen Palumbo
Reviewed on August 21, 2007
Wow! Great write Karla, some do live in glass houses. Been there done that with whatever is in reach, rocks, stones, pebbles.....

Be safe,
Karen

Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan
Reviewed on August 21, 2007
intersting write-i like the forceful feel of it

Reviewed by Michael Guy
Reviewed on August 21, 2007
"O to have a rock indeed" Give me a dozen, I'm getting testy! enjoyed
michael

Reviewed on August 21, 2007
Excellent write, thank you for sharing, keep it up and be blessed
God Bless
Michelle~

Reviewed by ~ Holly Harbridge (Reader)
Reviewed on August 21, 2007
Ya, i know the feeling, love ya, holly

Reviewed by Felix Perry
Reviewed on August 21, 2007
VEry good look at the way people are cruel to others and yes the glass house should be made of plexiglass.

Fee

Reviewed by Anna Marie Fritz (Reader)
Reviewed on August 21, 2007
An excellent exploitation of warped viewpoints!!!

Reviewed by Georg Mateos
Reviewed on August 21, 2007
Have a bunch of stones, say when and where!
Georg

Reviewed by Charles Keller
Reviewed on August 21, 2007
The voice of hypocricy is loud. Those who pretend to be so virtuous and belittle others should be stoned. Some of our politicians for example.

Good, poetic job of scolding a hypocrit.

Reviewed by Victor Buhagiar (Reader)
Reviewed on August 21, 2007
Wonderful poem. Enjoyed. Victor

Reviewed by - - - - - TRASK
Reviewed on August 21, 2007
Glass Houses Those Who Most A D Live In 2 Faced Glasses...

TRASK

Reviewed by Mr. Ed
Reviewed on August 21, 2007
How many ya need, I've got tons!

Reviewed on August 21, 2007
Enjoyed this Karla, a glimpse of your heart.

Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)
Reviewed on August 21, 2007
LOL, I'll send a stick of Brighton rock..


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