I especially love your opening line, "I want to grab you by the eye." The rest of the poem follows beautifully, but that opening line could even become my motto...Jerry
Jagged edge of the thunderbolt Truth in this Power of the Pen...the StormSpinner's Quill was born from marketable lightning harvested in the sky contingent upon the Storm - let it come! Thunder in twos! Be well you and Karen...Blessed Be.
The thunder rules and roars. So glad to see you my friend. The poem of mine 'I chose this' was written in 2001 when I was in a dark place. Feeling much better now. Take care my friend.
Excellent Karla. With pens in hands and all as one, we could change the whole world for the best. Why don't we do just that; replace the politicians with poets. Hmmmmmmmmm. Food for thought maybe? May the wind be at your back, the sun shine on your face and the Lord make a home in your heart. Hugs from Paul D. in the mountains of New Hampshire.
Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)
Reviewed on September 30, 2007
Becareful of those magic wands.
A word sure can...In the beginning was the.......
The thunder is the sky clearing its throat and then it spits and we call it rain. So now you know, think about it when you write lovingly poems about rain on your face. Take that!!!!!
Georg
I understand the indepth pillars of your poetic thought--to touch something so profoundly as to make it a part of your life--such as shaping words about something that pulls an object, occurence, etc. into our atmospheric space. Well done.
Oh Karla,
Do you really think so? I hope so, because I go to bed everynight praying that the Universe will hear my pleas for peace in this world.
Bless you,
Peace, Love, and LIght,
Amber "V"
so true and we do it mostly for therapy. A docotr would charge thousands for what we get with our minds and a simple pen and paper.
Great work!
Love,
Susan
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Your MN friend, Christine
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Sherry
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Eileen
Love & Peace, Janet xoxoxo
Here is a big pat on the back for us all...........
Walt
A word sure can...In the beginning was the.......
always,
randy
Well said and wisely thought... "Power of the Pen" sings to humanity and Peace.
In admiration,
Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU
"like lightning in the sky, we can
change the world in a single flash -
one word can do it -
listen to it thunder!"
There's power in your words today, and it is definitely God-inspired! Way to go! Keep on writing, may it soar higher than the Heavens!
(((HUGS))) and much love, your twin, Karen Lynn. :D
That pic: electrifying!! Fits the "nature" of the poem perfectly! :)
Fee
Georg
well Penned
Peace & Love be with you
William
good one Karla...
John
Do you really think so? I hope so, because I go to bed everynight praying that the Universe will hear my pleas for peace in this world.
Bless you,
Peace, Love, and LIght,
Amber "V"
Love,
annie
Great work!
Love,
Susan