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A Splendor of Years
by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner → (All Poetry by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner)
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This came so strong, had to write it down ...

"... Would I give them for a better life, riches and gold? ...."

Forty eight:  a splendor of years,
a splendor of years!  Worth the tears

I've cried.  Would I give them for a
better life, riches and gold?  Nay,

although the journey has been hard,
(heart broken in a thousand shards

of misery), I would not trade
the path taken, the mistakes made,

and learned from.  Would I change them?  Of
course.  But would I then have known ... love?

(c) 2007, Karla Dorman (11/16)

   

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 Reviews of "A Splendor of Years"
Reviewed on November 22, 2008
Karla,

C'est magnifique!! A poetic splendor!!


Hugs and blessings,

Lance

Reviewed by m j hollingshead
Reviewed on November 19, 2007
nicely done

Reviewed by Carole Mathys
Reviewed on November 18, 2007
I call that type of feelings...night thoughts...splendid poem Karla!
love and peace, Carole~

Reviewed by Walt Hardester
Reviewed on November 18, 2007
If I had it to do all over again...I probably would.

Walt

Reviewed on November 17, 2007
Another excellent write, the last Stanza packs a punch
God Bless
Michelle~

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Reviewed on November 17, 2007
Ditto ANdy on this one!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by Georg Mateos
Reviewed on November 17, 2007
That's not a lot of candles on a cake my sweet girl, you should see mine...but not without heavy shadows riding on your nose.
Georg

Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)
Reviewed on November 17, 2007
I sure know what you mean.
Taken me this long to learn not to take peeps at face value, and the few real friends, treasure them....

Reviewed by Charlie
Reviewed on November 16, 2007
I shudder at the thought of reliving my life. I've escaped so many tragedies by the skin of my teeth. I always think (as you do) that I would have missed out on a whole lot of beauty, and inevitably done a worse job of living. Nice thoughts. I'm glad you wrote them down. Writing sort of solidifies thoughts somehow, doesn't it? --Charlie

Reviewed by Axilea MU
Reviewed on November 16, 2007
Maturity and intelligence make this piece of poetry a reflection to share.

And I would add: "Would you have known... life?"

Warmest best,

Axilea

Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan
Reviewed on November 16, 2007
wonderful write- have often consisdered the same things

Reviewed by William Bonilla
Reviewed on November 16, 2007
Beautiful deep write Karla
Let what's in the past
Stay in the past, that's where it belongs
Don't look for no tomorrows
T'aint none so just live the rest of today
for when the sunrises, it will be another Today
Love & Peace

William

Reviewed by Karen Palumbo
Reviewed on November 16, 2007
All that happens good or not so good as we journey through life is always for a reason. No, I do not have any regrets because all wrapped up all the different things have molded me to be me and you to be you. Love the write...

Be safe,
Karen

Reviewed by Susan de Vegter
Reviewed on November 16, 2007
I wouldn't change a thing if I were you. :ife is a gravel road. If all was perfect we wouldn't realize that there is a difference.

Love,
Susan

Reviewed by Jibril Mohamed
Reviewed on November 16, 2007
No! Nothing compares to your life experiences. Bytheway, hardships give us the best lessons. So you are better prepared. Keep enjoying life. Nice write.

Abdullahi

Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)
Reviewed on November 16, 2007
Nicely said, Karla . . .

Reviewed by Dee C.
Reviewed on November 16, 2007
Tears...oh so true!!
Such a beautiful write!!
Dee

Reviewed by Paul Berube
Reviewed on November 16, 2007
Well done Karla. God has blessed you in so many ways and love is the greatest blessing of all. Keep the faith.
Paul

Reviewed on November 16, 2007
Karla~

Beautiful message; you give us much thought in provocative verse. And rhymed it yet! Now THAT's coolness! Very well penned; brava!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your twink, Karen Lynn. :D

Reviewed by Jeanette Cooper
Reviewed on November 16, 2007
A soul-searching poem with a satisfying answer. We all would likely change--or want to change--some things, but most we'd keep the same.

Reviewed by Felix Perry
Reviewed on November 16, 2007
What a romantic and nostalgic look at love and the feelings that linger as loving memories forever..no matter what heartache occurs.

Fee


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