November Moon (poem) by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner on AuthorsDen

Reviewed on November 29, 2007

Are you moonstruck Karla, open the window slightly let it hover over your shoulders and play the moonlight sonata, have some one read that beautiful poem next to you, that should give the rigtht atmosphere,have it filmed as your doing it ....Bless you!Jasmin Horst

Reviewed by hazeleyed angel (Reader)

Reviewed on November 27, 2007

I love this, it is a very good write, short and to the point.

Reviewed by Randall Barfield

Reviewed on November 27, 2007

Ha. Have mercy on all of us! Great title and little piece. Cheers

Reviewed by Sheri Uy

Reviewed on November 27, 2007

The Moon, like the eye of the Beautiful One
all seeing, all knowing...
For a while, you got me speechless there Karla. Simply beautiful!

Be well,
Sheri

Reviewed by Charlie

Reviewed on November 27, 2007

I always thought the moon was an eye--profile, then gradually full-face. Short and sweet, and Whammming. --Charlie

Reviewed by Mary Coe

Reviewed on November 27, 2007

Powerful! A beautiful write.

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes

Reviewed on November 27, 2007

Reviewed by Kathryn Collins (Reader)

Reviewed on November 27, 2007

Wow Karla --

The moon is a powerful thing.

love,
Kathy

Reviewed by Poetess of The Soul Sheila G

Reviewed on November 27, 2007

BEAUTIFUL! and All Knowing!
I love what I've been seein' and feelin'
I have a poem comin' on the early morning moon! :)
Warm hugs and Warmer Blessings, Warrior Lady Sheeeoox

STay Positive!

Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan

Reviewed on November 26, 2007

this is lovely-i love the visual as well

Reviewed by LadyJtalks LadyJzTalkZone (Reader)

Reviewed on November 26, 2007

Good little write full of thoughts. Lady J

Reviewed by Walt Hardester

Reviewed on November 26, 2007

It is a beautiful one this month Karla.
Here's "Moonin" ya.

Walt

Reviewed by Michelle Kidwell Power In The Pen

Reviewed on November 26, 2007

A beautiful write, keep these coming
God Bless
Michelle~

Reviewed by Amber Moonstone

Reviewed on November 26, 2007

The Moon sees all, knows all and is all...I loved your poem. The moon is sending you it's magical energy, Karla, just take it in and feel good!
Peace, Love, and Light,
Amber "V"

Reviewed by Sheila Roy

Reviewed on November 26, 2007

Fantastic metaphor here. You have me thinking about the moon in a whole new light - very difficult to do! Great sense of humor at the end~ lol! -Sheila

Reviewed by Kate Clifford (Reader)

Reviewed on November 26, 2007

Yes and your beautiful :-)

Reviewed by Carole Mathys

Reviewed on November 26, 2007

A lovely verse on the magic of a full moon...who knows what it sees
love and peace, Carole~

Reviewed by Rebecca Lerwill

Reviewed on November 26, 2007

Sounds like you're being hypnotized, Karla.
Whatch out for the spell....
great write!
R~

Reviewed by Staci Gansky-Wagner

Reviewed on November 26, 2007

Great pic! Wonderful write short and sweet and meaningful.

Reviewed by Christine Alwin

Reviewed on November 26, 2007

yes, I beleive the man in the moon sees very well,,,
great one Karla
Christine

Reviewed by Susan de Vegter

Reviewed on November 26, 2007

The mystery of the moon is clear for me. It is the light to shine the way for all of us dreamers.
love,
Susan

Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado

Reviewed on November 26, 2007

Beautiful write about the Full Moon; indeed, it is a wonderous sight to behold! Your poetry keeps on getting better and better! BRAVA!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your twink, Karen Lynn. :D

Reviewed by David Young

Reviewed on November 26, 2007

Yes, I can the heart of a poet. Email 1 went out.

Reviewed by Kimmy Van Kooten

Reviewed on November 26, 2007

Oh I saw it, through the flames, while we burned the oak
I saw it, through the limbs hanging Spanish moss
I did...and inside, through the eye...BIG POSSIBILITIES!
This has So much to offer,Karla, ... with so little left out!
Excellente! :)
Love and Peace~
Kimmy~

Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)

Reviewed on November 26, 2007

Ed's full moon ain't.
The man in the moon is looking down on you.
I saw clouds, I guess you have the moon, can yer hand it back.
I love it when the moon is magnified through the earths atmosphere, i was stunned at it as a kid....

Nice one.

Reviewed by Georg Mateos

Reviewed on November 26, 2007

...and, don't you heard me howling?
Georg

Reviewed by Felix Perry

Reviewed on November 26, 2007

Yes it was one of the prettiest full moons of the year or so it seemed to me.
Good write Karla.

Fee

Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)

Reviewed on November 26, 2007

Ah hah! The moon knows . . .

Reviewed by Mr. Ed

Reviewed on November 26, 2007

The Full Moon is an awesome sight to behold, and it does see all - so be very good!