The Hush of Evening (poem) by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner on AuthorsDen

Reviewed by Cryssa C

Reviewed on January 16, 2008

I love the way this poem leads the reader on the same path as the moon, the sun and the stars. You do an excellent job of drawing the reader in and taking them on a journey right along with you.

Cryssa

Reviewed by Walt Hardester

Reviewed on January 16, 2008

I like this one, peaceful colors.

Walt

Reviewed by John Leko

Reviewed on January 14, 2008

... a bedtime story...putting the light of day...into the arms of evening.
well done Karla...
John

Reviewed by Daniel McTaggart

Reviewed on January 14, 2008

One of the best times of the day, in my opinion. It really is always a beautiful thing to see.

Reviewed by William Bonilla

Reviewed on January 14, 2008

yes and deed i love this writting too Karla
enjoying this side of you.....lol
Peace be with you
Peace & love be with you

Reviewed by Carole Mathys

Reviewed on January 14, 2008

I am enjoying the new turn your writing is taking...softly, hush

love, Carole~

Reviewed by Georg Mateos

Reviewed on January 14, 2008

...but before you did, going to bed I mean, you dropped your poem on the subconscious face so we can see the literary ripples.
Georg

Reviewed by Felix Perry

Reviewed on January 14, 2008

Excellanto...I like the way this treats the sun in the heavens as a naughty child refusing to go to sleep.

Fee

Reviewed by Dawn Anderson

Reviewed on January 13, 2008

Karla, your poetry is always so beautiful, and this is no exception!
"The stars climb dusk and set
themselves on high, reminding the day
it had its time to shine," Just beautiful!

Reviewed by Charlie

Reviewed on January 13, 2008

I especially love the line, "The stars climb dusk". --Charlie

Reviewed by E T Waldron

Reviewed on January 13, 2008

I love where your muse has taken you of late Karla! Splendid imagery beautifully worded!
Great image!

Love,
ET

Reviewed by Sheri Uy

Reviewed on January 13, 2008

A beautiful insight about the end of day...and the soft coming of the night...huuussh...

luv ya!
Sheri

Reviewed by Kathy Armijo

Reviewed on January 13, 2008

Between your words and picture, you have captured the 'hush' as evening approaches. It is truly evocative.

God bless you. Kathy

Reviewed by Susan de Vegter

Reviewed on January 13, 2008

Your colors are easy colors. The sky is the best resource for any artist for inspirations.

Love and blessings!
Susan

Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)

Reviewed on January 13, 2008

Got the day all tucked in . . . Nice job too . . .

Reviewed by Rebecca Lerwill

Reviewed on January 13, 2008

Sweet write, Karla. Don't let the bed bugs bite!
Good night~

Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan

Reviewed on January 13, 2008

we had such a bright sunset, it was awesome! Love the picture and the write

Reviewed by Ann Scarborough

Reviewed on January 13, 2008

Stars putting the day to bed. Lovely thought.
Love,
annie

Reviewed by Rose Rideout

Reviewed on January 13, 2008

This is beautiful Karla. Thank you for sharing.

Newfie Hugs are coming your way, Rose

Reviewed by Beryl McMullen

Reviewed on January 13, 2008

Love this Karla sweet dreams to'Day'

Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado

Reviewed on January 13, 2008

Karla~

This is gorgeous. Ending the day on a smile. Very well penned and imaged; brava!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your twink, Karen Lynn. :D

Now, bo to ged! :) LOL

Reviewed by Michelle Kidwell Power In The Pen

Reviewed on January 13, 2008

A beautiful write from your poetic pen keep these coming Karla
God Bless
Michelle~

Reviewed by Christine Alwin

Reviewed on January 13, 2008

hushhhhhhhh, Good Night