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Tears
by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner → (All Poetry by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner)
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This just came to me, and so, I write ...

Image (c) 2005, Karla Dorman


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A fall drops slowly,
tracing its way down cheeks
determined not to
let it join its brothers.
I fail to save it
as it jumps from my eyes,
a suicidal
leap into the abyss.
Others push their way
to the surface - lemmings
clinging to the cliffs
my lashes have become:
made easier by
the first brave one, they let
go, drown in the seas
gathering at my feet ...

(c) 2008, Karla Dorman (1/26)




 

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 Reviews of "Tears"
Reviewed by Liana Margiva
Reviewed on March 11, 2008
' A fall drops slowly, tracing its way down....' ---- I like this so much, that I can write my own poem after this sentence!!!!!!! Liana Margiva
Reviewed by RaeLynn Teller
Reviewed on January 28, 2008
Been playing catch up this evening.
And found this gem.
Its a keeper.
Well done.
--RaeLynn
Reviewed by Carole Mathys
Reviewed on January 28, 2008
Now this is a refreshing take on tears, love it...make me think of that old song Cry Me A River...
love, Carole~
Reviewed by Rafika Anderson (Reader)
Reviewed on January 27, 2008
I love the vibrancy and energy in your writing. It just pervades and penetrates each line. Great stuff, my friend.
Reviewed by Amber Moonstone
Reviewed on January 27, 2008
Very emotionally and profoundly written Karla, I love this..The photo is so beautiful
Peace, love, and light,
Amber "V"
Reviewed by Felix Perry
Reviewed on January 27, 2008
Excellant write Karla, this is absoulutely one of soul aching quality and I can honestly say I enjoyed this more than any other write you have done. Fresh and new,even if a bit poignant...it is lovely.
hugs
Fee
Reviewed by Mary Patterson
Reviewed on January 27, 2008
Such emotion shown in this exceptional write!........M
Reviewed by Dawn Anderson
Reviewed on January 27, 2008
Written with true emotion.
Reviewed by Georg Mateos
Reviewed on January 27, 2008
A compendium in few words of one anatomy of sadness.

Georg
Reviewed by William Bonilla
Reviewed on January 26, 2008
Beautiful poetry Karla
so is that great clear beach piture
You poste it to accompany its excellence
Love & Peace be with you

William
Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)
Reviewed on January 26, 2008
Very unique, gives a new meaning to drowning in tears...
Reviewed by Charlie
Reviewed on January 26, 2008
Who knew I'd absolutely love a poem about crying?! You, my friend, are a genius... Write On! --Charlie
Reviewed by blue soplain (Reader)
Reviewed on January 26, 2008
. . .. haunted but somehow. ...
open, and full

glorious thing youve conjoured
ness
Reviewed by Mary Coe
Reviewed on January 26, 2008
Good imagery. Enjoyed.
Reviewed by john zimmerman
Reviewed on January 26, 2008
k.j.

stunning poem

I love the emerging complexity and scope of your work
good write
h & s

john+
Reviewed by Cynth'ya Reed
Reviewed on January 26, 2008
This is quite different for you Sis. . . very soothing words that make up one of the most philosophical poems I've ever seen here. Sharp! You go girl!
blessin's and (((HUGS)))
cynth'ya
Reviewed by Susan de Vegter
Reviewed on January 26, 2008
Tears are a cleansing and conditioning that is medicinal for the living.
Blessing to you karla dear!
love,
Susan
Reviewed by Cryssa C
Reviewed on January 26, 2008
Too many great lines for me to pick just one... I love the imagery in the poem.
Cryssa
Reviewed by Rose Rideout
Reviewed on January 26, 2008
Always remember dear Karla, tears are shed to wash pain and hurt away. Thank you for sharing.

Newfie Hugs are coming your way, Rose
Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado
Reviewed on January 26, 2008
Very well penned emotion, Karla; you do these so well! BRAVA!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your twinkles, Karen Lynn. :D
Reviewed by Michelle Kidwell Power In The Pen
Reviewed on January 26, 2008
Powerful words, well written, keep sharing these wonderful poems..
God Bless
Michelle~
Reviewed by Theresa Koch
Reviewed on January 26, 2008
Sad sonnet written perfectly~`*
Reviewed by OnepoetGem *the Poetic Rapper
Reviewed on January 26, 2008
great moving verse Karla, truly. love&hugs
Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)
Reviewed on January 26, 2008
Very visual piece of work here, Karla . . .
Reviewed by Nicky Goodman
Reviewed on January 26, 2008
'Bravo tears! Bravo!' wonderful images in this teary poem Karla - well penned indeed *passes hanky* :o)xx
Reviewed by D Johnson
Reviewed on January 26, 2008
Oh, this is so good, I shed a tear in its reading.

Peace,
Dan
Reviewed by John Leko
Reviewed on January 26, 2008
...with emotion penned...a creative and well done write...in the life of tears.
this is great Karla...
John
Reviewed by Charles Keller
Reviewed on January 26, 2008
Strong stuff, Karla. Good job.
Reviewed by Rebecca Lerwill
Reviewed on January 26, 2008
Yes, emotional, but tears aren't always a bad thing.
Loved it,
Becca~
Reviewed by Staci Gansky-Wagner
Reviewed on January 26, 2008
Emotional poem, such a good write though.
Reviewed by Larry Lounsbury
Reviewed on January 26, 2008
There is such a cascade of emotionin this poem. Perhaps a blessed relief, a long time in coming.
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