Sun/Day (poem) by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner on AuthorsDen

Reviewed by Cryssa C

Reviewed on March 14, 2008

I love this... the double meaning of several of the words bringing fresh images to my mind.
Cryssa

Reviewed by Gianetta Ellis (Reader)

Reviewed on March 12, 2008

Very beautiful - I love your word choices. Enjoyed!

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes

Reviewed on March 12, 2008

Colorful offering!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by John Leko

Reviewed on March 12, 2008

...this is another one of your best Karla...
beautiful...
John

Reviewed by Michael Guy

Reviewed on March 12, 2008

You write great Spring/Easter/Resurrection poems. This is at least the 2nd in a series (to me). So far, #10's, short, sweet like the first blooms of Crocus I remember pushing through the encrusted snow in March. Spring is your time - are you a Spring sign?

Reviewed by Bernice Angoh

Reviewed on March 12, 2008

You are to me sort of the Nature's whisperer! And the pictures that go with your poetry and stunning.

Reviewed by Carole Mathys

Reviewed on March 12, 2008

Lovely poem Karla...Spring is a great season after a long winter
love, Carole~

Reviewed by Bonnie May

Reviewed on March 12, 2008

Yes, lets soak up the sun my friend. Great tribute to spring and what's to come. Love, Bonnie

Reviewed by Mary Patterson

Reviewed on March 12, 2008

Beautiful thoughts Karla. An other season , a new start.. Hope this year is better for all!........M

Reviewed by Diana Wiles

Reviewed on March 12, 2008

Life, Hope, and renewal. Spring...the time of year we probably yearn for the most..! This captures the feeling so admirably, and also the fact that along with Nature, we too are revived from the grip Of Winter...Love and Hugs, Diana.

Reviewed by Rose Rideout

Reviewed on March 12, 2008

Very nicely written Karla altough it will be a while before we get to see any sign of natures life under the 8 ft. of snow outside my front door. Thank you for sharing.

Newfie Hugs are on the way, Rose

Reviewed by Jeanette Cooper

Reviewed on March 12, 2008

Your poem echoes the sounds of spring--and the colors--and renewal.

Reviewed by Mr. Ed

Reviewed on March 12, 2008

Every Resurrection is Marvelous!

Reviewed by Georg Mateos

Reviewed on March 12, 2008

Introducing life after the storms, colors after the darkness, and optimism as Spring are knocking on your door.

Georg

Reviewed by Nicky Goodman

Reviewed on March 12, 2008

'deceased, resurrection, refreshed, renewed' S p r i n g! Is it there with you yet? I'm on 'The Island of Eternal Spring' which is great, but even with the poetry, i missed Autumn very much - good springy write Karla :o)

Reviewed by Mary Coe

Reviewed on March 11, 2008

Very, very nice.

Reviewed by Sheila Roy

Reviewed on March 11, 2008

I think many experience depression in the winter. Your last few lines capture that sentiment and give hope, Karla. Well done! Love and Hugs~
Sheila

Reviewed by Felix Perry

Reviewed on March 11, 2008

Very nicely done and the flowers spring us into Easter with a flash of colour.
hugs
Fee

Reviewed by Michelle Mead

Reviewed on March 11, 2008

I really loved how you added the Easter message into this, it was accomplished well with a brevity that makes it more powerful. Love it! xxxBlessings, Michelle

Reviewed by Robert Wilson (Reader)

Reviewed on March 11, 2008

Literally for you in authorsden! :)

Reviewed by Axilea MU

Reviewed on March 11, 2008

Very lovely conclusion, I like the way you introduced this thought.

Axilea

Reviewed by Amber Moonstone

Reviewed on March 11, 2008

Let the sunshine in !!!! You go, renewal and rebirth! I love your poem, Karla, write on...
Peace, love, and light,
Amber "V"

Reviewed by Rebecca Lerwill

Reviewed on March 11, 2008

UUhh, that's so pretty. In word as in photo!
Love,
Becca~

Reviewed by Charlie

Reviewed on March 11, 2008

Karla-- you genius! What a beautiful Easter/Spring thingy. I absolutely love this. --Charlie

Reviewed by E T Waldron

Reviewed on March 11, 2008

You are really rollin em out Karla! Great stuff!

Reviewed by Karen Palumbo

Reviewed on March 11, 2008

As the flowers bloom with color and vibrancy so does the human optimism....

Be always safe,
Karen

Reviewed by Ed Matlack

Reviewed on March 11, 2008

Still a bit cool up here, but the beach today was a beautiful place for Rufuz and I to spend a couple of hours...keep sending the nice weather north...e & R

Reviewed by Chantilly Lace (Reader)

Reviewed on March 11, 2008

Oh my, how beautiful sweet lady,stay safe and well...Hugss

Reviewed by JASMIN HORST SEILER

Reviewed on March 11, 2008

First I read, am giving new life, but you're are only enjoying it, yes spring will do that to you! Happy thoughts of that sort brighten my day! Hugs and Blessings! Jasmin Horst

Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan

Reviewed on March 11, 2008

reading this i feel a bit of the same!

Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado

Reviewed on March 11, 2008

Beautiful write for the heralding of spring! Very well penned and illustrated, Karla; brava!

Only thing I am not looking forward to is svr wx! You know that!! LOL

(((HUGS))) and much love, your twinkles, Karen Lynn. :D

Reviewed by Jill Eisnaugle

Reviewed on March 11, 2008

Karla,
Now, that's the spirit. Spring is a time of renewal in so many ways and I am looking forward to the season's beginning, myself, in hopes I'll find a little "renewal" too. I am excited about what the future has in store for not only myself but for everyone else I know who has been searching for a newfound way in life.

Beautiful writing from your pen, my dear.

Jill

Reviewed by Rebecca McKeehan

Reviewed on March 11, 2008

I love your spring poems. They really lift my spirits. Rebecca