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My/Graine II
by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner → (All Poetry by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner)
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Danged migraines!!

my head, clamped in a vice
that won't.  Let.  Go.  it hurts
to think, to write.  right eye
draws in, seeing no.thing
but red [thunder].  my/graine
once more.  the storm roars at
the sun and all things light:
only thing i want is dark .. . ...

(c) 2008, Karla Dorman (3/25)

 


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 Reviews of "My/Graine II"
Reviewed by Phyllis Jean Green
Reviewed on March 26, 2008
Very well done and very upsetting. My/graine inspired, but. . .sounds like you suffer from full-blown migraines. If your doctor hasn't found a way to relieve them, please God let it happen soon!!! (((((((((((((( Hugging you gently))))))))))) Pea

Reviewed on March 26, 2008
Boy can I relate and they arent fun, I will be praying for you
God Bless
Michelle~

Reviewed by Georg Mateos
Reviewed on March 26, 2008
On a light note trying to make your day better, maybe struts have the right idea about burying their head in the sand so the headache can't find them...

Georg

Reviewed by Dawn Anderson
Reviewed on March 26, 2008
My sister has a brain aneurism that is inoperable, and it has been clamped. There are times when she suffers from migranes so fierce, nothing ...not even perscription medicines...can make her feel better. Hope you feel better soon, Karla!

Reviewed by Randall Barfield
Reviewed on March 25, 2008
Excellent. Love the punctuation. Cold, cold cloth on your forehead.

Reviewed by Jon Willey
Reviewed on March 25, 2008
As a former sufferer, I sympathize with you. The pain was always intense, unrelenting. I hope it passed quickly so you had relief. Jon Michael Willey

Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan
Reviewed on March 25, 2008
so sorry--take care, rest, turn out lights---

Reviewed by Chantilly Lace (Reader)
Reviewed on March 25, 2008
Oh my,I hope you start to feel better real soon sweet lady,missed ya...take care OK...Hugss

Reviewed by Kate Burnside
Reviewed on March 25, 2008
OK... so you need to be locked up in a room naked with Andy... I see... Reckon that might cure you pretty quick... If he don't, the laughter will! :)) And I hope you've now got it too dark to read this review.... xxx Get well soon, Karla.

Reviewed by Donna Quesinberry
Reviewed on March 25, 2008
what an insightful descriptive write

takes us to the place and gives us the vision

thanks, ~D.

Reviewed by Charlie
Reviewed on March 25, 2008
That's because mygraines love the dark--live the dark, and breathe it in... Evil thing inside my head too, at times. I met a lady once who thought headaches were a figment of the imagination. She'd never had one! Well, I'm not one to wish evil on anyone, but I thought she difinitely needed to experience one for herself. That'd teach her a truth or two. --Charlie

Reviewed by Karen Palumbo
Reviewed on March 25, 2008
Oh Karla, how horrific is the pain and so long to leave once it arrives. Those days belong to ice packs and quiet. You are in my prayers.....

Be always safe,
Karen

Reviewed by Paul Berube
Reviewed on March 25, 2008
Karla,

Hope you feel better. Peace, Love and Blessings Always, Paul.

Reviewed by Rose Rideout
Reviewed on March 25, 2008
I know this feeling and you need an ice pack and a dark quiet room to get away from your pain dear Karla, relax.

Newfie Hugs are on the way, Rose

Reviewed by John Leko
Reviewed on March 25, 2008
...head on for a cure Karla...and what of the bare humor in Andy's review...lol
John

Reviewed by john zimmerman
Reviewed on March 25, 2008
OucH

take care
k&h
john

btw

good write

Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)
Reviewed on March 25, 2008
Sadly there is no cure, three days in a dark room, and wait.
I get the full kit with mine too.
But there is one cure that I've invented, it works, but only on naked women... lol

Reviewed by Bernice Angoh
Reviewed on March 25, 2008
Very creative...like it so swell, sorry about the my/graine...

Reviewed on March 25, 2008

Painful emotions depicted in "My/Graine II". Expressed and painted with the colors of reality.

Health and Craetivity.

In admiration,

Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Reviewed on March 25, 2008
Oh dang sorry to hear you are not feeling good!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by Rebecca McKeehan
Reviewed on March 25, 2008
May your pain be fleeting...Rebecca

Reviewed by Jeanette Cooper
Reviewed on March 25, 2008
Pain, it appears, has it own sweet music in the excellent word images you've written.

Reviewed on March 25, 2008
Been there...and darkness is a reprieve. Stay out of these windy days we're having, girl. Better day ahead for you!

Micke


Reviewed by Jill Eisnaugle
Reviewed on March 25, 2008
There is nothing worse than a migraine, Karla. I suffer from them, too. Usually, I slap some Head On across my forehead and take a nap. That's usually the best relief I can find.

Hang in there,
Jill

Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)
Reviewed on March 25, 2008
Sorry . . . Here's hoping releif will come swift . . .

Reviewed by Ed Matlack
Reviewed on March 25, 2008
Sorry to hear of the pain,
Rufuz & I will think of you today,
To the beach we go before tomorrows rain,
We both hope from the pain your head does refrain...Rufuz & Ed

Reviewed by Cryssa C
Reviewed on March 25, 2008
I hear you! I feel your pain! Ice on the neck and heat on the feet helps to draw the pain out..
Hope you feel better soon!
Cryssa

Reviewed on March 25, 2008
OUCH. This made ME hurt! Sorry about your head; hope you get the relief you need soon! You are in my prayers!

Very well penned account of the agony called My.Graine! BRAVA!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your twin, Karen Lynn. :(

Reviewed by Bonnie May
Reviewed on March 25, 2008
Oh my friend, get a bag of ice and lay down. Nothing worse, I will keep you in my prayers. Love ya, Bonnie


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