Go, And Sin No More (poem) by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner on AuthorsDen

Reviewed on May 19, 2008

Have been reading many of your reviews on other author's works. You always give good clean reviews that matter to the reader. Glad I finally found your site tonite. Stay well and enjoy your days and nights. Whether you are happy or sad, you seem to make people glad.

Reviewed by Safi Abdi

Reviewed on May 17, 2008

Enjoyed the read, powerful. Safi

Reviewed by Michelle Kidwell Power In The Pen

Reviewed on May 17, 2008

Beautiful write, keep it up amd be blessed
God Bless
Michelle~

Reviewed by Robert Blackwell

Reviewed on May 17, 2008

Beautiful work, my friend.

Reviewed by John Leko

Reviewed on May 16, 2008

...wonderful poetry to give new meaning to...heaven scent.
great write Karla...
John

Reviewed by Regis Auffray

Reviewed on May 16, 2008

I've got a feeling you're not much of a sinner, Karla. Thanks for sharing the "high." Love and best wishes,

Regis

Reviewed by Georg Mateos

Reviewed on May 16, 2008

Whatever one talks of about, we note the lack of washing when the smell becomes intolerable, and that goes for spiritual ones too.

Georg

Reviewed by Jeanette Cooper

Reviewed on May 16, 2008

You've extended that wonderful feeling to me in the words:

... Lungs expand like sails, taking
in deep draughts of refreshment:

Reviewed by Dawn Anderson

Reviewed on May 15, 2008

This is absolutely beautiful

Reviewed by David Clure

Reviewed on May 15, 2008

Wow! This is visually stunning ! Can feel it in my gut as I read -am reminded of our Saviour's love.

excellent, Karla.
-zach

Reviewed by Jon Willey

Reviewed on May 15, 2008

Karla,your analogies are just superbly written. A beautiful piece of poetry. May peace be always with you. JMW

Reviewed by Robert Wilson (Reader)

Reviewed on May 15, 2008

Bet you would like to be in a heavy fog, Karla. Similar effect. :) Clouds are just fogs when you get up into the in a plane.

Reviewed by Connie Faust

Reviewed on May 15, 2008

Couldn't be more rejuvenating! Wonderful depiction of a heart washed clean by Jesus and His redeeming blood.
Just what I needed tonight.

Love,
Connie

Reviewed by Flying Fox Ted L Glines (Reader)

Reviewed on May 15, 2008

Excellent, Karla!

"...my fears, forgiven. This
is what it means to be clean"

This is what Jesus had in mind, even knowing that folks would miss the point.

Lovely!
Ted

Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado

Reviewed on May 15, 2008

Beautiful write, Karla; well penned and imaged! BRAVA!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your twink, Karen Lynn. :D

Reviewed by Ed Matlack

Reviewed on May 15, 2008

Yeah, but before you dry those clouds you send them north & east to NJ to be squeezed and twisted till all the water is out of them and on the ground here...;) ed

Reviewed by Felix Perry

Reviewed on May 15, 2008

Very nicely expressed and another well written analogy.

Fee

Reviewed by Tiana ~ (Reader)

Reviewed on May 15, 2008

Awww sweetie, this is so precious ... beautifully written, Karla ... hugs

Reviewed by Paul Berube

Reviewed on May 15, 2008

What sweet inspiration you offer us Karla. Well done my friend. God bless.

Reviewed by Richard Cederberg

Reviewed on May 15, 2008

A solid analogy of storms and one's spiritual condition. Stormspinner ... you are one of a kind indeed!
Blessings and hugs ...

Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan

Reviewed on May 15, 2008

beautiful write--very soft and soothing

Reviewed by Cryssa C

Reviewed on May 15, 2008

Karla, this is absolutely superb! Stunning...

Cryssa

Reviewed by Sage Sweetwater

Reviewed on May 15, 2008

Cathartic...purification through the quill...now snuggle with a warm blanket rolled around in the dryer with a fabric softener sheet and put this one to bed, Karla...be well you and Karen Lynn...

Love,
Sage

Reviewed by Bonnie May

Reviewed on May 15, 2008

What a wonderful write, and your description is unbelievable. You don't need pictures. Love, Bonnie

Reviewed by Charlie

Reviewed on May 15, 2008

--lovely visuals again. --Charlie