Fury (poem) by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner on AuthorsDen

Reviewed on June 12, 2008

Wow! What a powerful photograph. When she raises her voice, everyone had better listen. Well done Karla. Stay safe. JMW

Reviewed on June 11, 2008

hmmmmmmmmm. Now there's some food for thought. Well done Karla.

Reviewed on June 11, 2008

OH may! so you ain't cleaned your room yet! then, don't complain when all those thunders come until you are done!

Georg

Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan

Reviewed on June 11, 2008

love the humor here! and a great analogy

Reviewed by Dawn Anderson

Reviewed on June 10, 2008

I love it! Cute write, Karla.

Reviewed by Michelle Kidwell Power In The Pen

Reviewed on June 10, 2008

Wow! This reminds me of what I felt as a child when I did something wrong...
God Bless
Michelle~

Reviewed by Cryssa C

Reviewed on June 10, 2008

Perfect personification of the weather!
Cryssa

Reviewed by Bernice Angoh

Reviewed on June 10, 2008

yes, a mother's fury is like mother nature's!!!

Reviewed by Jeanette Cooper

Reviewed on June 10, 2008

That's a neat way to describe mama's fury. Cute and nicely done.

Reviewed by A PAX

Reviewed on June 10, 2008

lol

Reviewed by Lois Christensen

Reviewed on June 10, 2008

Furious black cloud, looks tornado like to me. Smoke going all around. A child seeing her things going astrew would be quite upset, even if they don't take care of them, they still want them when needed. I so love to watch children at play on their little riding toys with their legs going so fast. Fury is a great poem.

Reviewed by Christine Alwin

Reviewed on June 10, 2008

I can feel the chaos,,, great write Karla!

Reviewed by Chantilly Lace (Reader)

Reviewed on June 10, 2008

Just wonderful sweet lady,well done indeed...stay safe and well OK...Hugss

Reviewed by Mary Lacey Desertrat

Reviewed on June 10, 2008

So cute, can imagine what a child feel. Great

Mary

Reviewed by Kate Burnside

Reviewed on June 10, 2008

Good metaphor! Many a time I've felt like she's givin me a good spankin when I've got dirty and wet at the beach, but at least, in this instance, her fury is perhaps a righteous indignation. We've toyed with her patience long enough, I fear... Another great write, Karla. Kate xx

Reviewed by ~ Holly Harbridge (Reader)

Reviewed on June 10, 2008

This is fantastic Karla, love Holly

Reviewed by John Leko

Reviewed on June 10, 2008

...great write here...gives nature and mother...the upper hand.
well done Karla...
John

Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado

Reviewed on June 10, 2008

Love the sense of humor in this; shades of Mom in this one! BRAVA, Karla; enjoyed~

(((HUGS))) and much love, your twin, Karen Lynn. :D

Reviewed by Gene Williamson

Reviewed on June 10, 2008

Karla, the beauty of fury is the way you write it. - Gene.