Change (poem) by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner on AuthorsDen

Reviewed by William Potter

Reviewed on August 23, 2008

I agree, it feels like summer is over...oh well, fall is my fav season.
Well done...and with so few words.

William

Reviewed by Sheila Roy

Reviewed on August 21, 2008

So true! Nice picture, too, Karla.
Sheila

Reviewed by Rebecca Lerwill

Reviewed on August 19, 2008

Change is good. But tis' too early for fall!
R~

Reviewed by Paul Berube

Reviewed on August 19, 2008

Good Lord Karla; you're rushing thinks a bit here girl. With Autumn over a month away me thinks the heat's getting to you. Good write tho my friend.

Reviewed by OnepoetGem *the Poetic Rapper

Reviewed on August 18, 2008

yes a change is gonna come Karla regardless, nice verse, I like it, hugs

Reviewed by La Belle Rouge Poetess Of The Heart

Reviewed on August 18, 2008

Truly a brilliant write Karla, in the natural and the metaphorical.

Reviewed by Georg Mateos

Reviewed on August 18, 2008

I didn't knew that lil'brother Jersey Ed could read...but Farmers Almanac?, now I know is a nut case through and through!

Georg

Reviewed by Mr. Ed

Reviewed on August 18, 2008

to everything, change must
come

How so very true.

Reviewed by Axilea MU

Reviewed on August 18, 2008

The last line offers an interesting perspective... :)

Axilea

Reviewed by Cynthia Buhain-Baello

Reviewed on August 18, 2008

Hello Karla,

How very true. Each day brings change, not just in seasons, but in ourselves too.

Cynthia

Reviewed by Stuart McCallum

Reviewed on August 17, 2008

Hello Karla,
Wonderful writing, so real everything will eventually change. Sometimes for the better!

Take good care, Stuart

Reviewed by Felix Perry

Reviewed on August 17, 2008

Scary but true, leafs up here have already began to turn colours. Early winter this year I fear.
hugs
Fee

Reviewed by Phyllis Jean Green

Reviewed on August 17, 2008

"although the press of autumn surprises it in the trees" LOVE IT!!
And your photograph is great!! GO, sweet friend, GO !!! Pea Hooluvzyoo Reeleeandtroolee

Reviewed by Charlie

Reviewed on August 17, 2008

Good write, Karla. And I love the pic. It looks like a falcoln, wings spread, watching winter bubble up. --Charlie

Reviewed by William Bonilla

Reviewed on August 17, 2008

Excellent write Karla
Right now I am hoping for some change in our direction
Tropical storm Fay, Turning into a hurricaine heading my way
I pray she takes a change and fizzles out in the ocean
I don't wish her on no one
Love & peace be with you

William

Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado

Reviewed on August 17, 2008

I hope the summer is waning; I've had more than enough of the hot weather! Very well penned and illustrated, Karla; brava!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your twin, Karen Lynn. :D

Reviewed by Ed Matlack

Reviewed on August 17, 2008

I don't know, the farmers almanac says we are in for a warm fall & early winter, but look out after the first of the year...by then I will have enough propane to get through the rest of the winter, I hope...keep warm in the boonies of Texas...Ed & Rufuz

Reviewed by Michelle Kidwell Power In The Pen

Reviewed on August 17, 2008

Thank you for sharing, I hope you are feeling better
In Christs Love
Michelle~

Reviewed by Rose Rideout

Reviewed on August 17, 2008

Thank you Karla and you are right we can't change it so we have to except what comes each day. Thank you for sharing.

Newfie Hugs are on the way, Rose