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I'll Leave The Light On
by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner → (All Poetry by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner)
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... God gazes down from star.eyed
skies, searching for the prodigal who
ran.  i try to shr.ink myself into the
darkness, into the shadowy places,
so He can't see [i am naked - dirty -
afraid].  Against the vastness of His
love, a meteor falls:  or is it?  Maybe
it's a tear, cried from Him to me.  He
sighs and, before settling in for the
long wait, turns on the light:  just in
case i change my mind about running
away.  i'll need it to find my way home.

(c) 2008, Karla Dorman (11/17)


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 Reviews of "I'll Leave The Light On"
Reviewed by Richard Orey
Reviewed on November 24, 2008
Yes, we are never alone. God is everywhere.

I love your animated picture, too!

Richard

Reviewed by 000 000 (Reader)
Reviewed on November 20, 2008
Karla, you are such a lovely poet! Original, beautiful, fulfilling!
CarolHawks

Reviewed by Bernice Angoh
Reviewed on November 20, 2008
Oh, Karla! now you've outdone yourself with this one, it is truly glorious.

Reviewed by Dawn Anderson
Reviewed on November 20, 2008
Karla, I can't even begin to tell you how lovely this is.

Reviewed by Regis Auffray
Reviewed on November 19, 2008
A very moving offering, Karla. Love and blessings to you,

Regis

Reviewed by Cindy Tuttle
Reviewed on November 18, 2008
Again.This was touched me enough to cry. So powerful!I can learn much from you.
With Love,
Cindy

Reviewed by Jon Willey
Reviewed on November 18, 2008
Karla, "the light and the way" -- in these times when we all feel on some days like the prodigal son-- your words encourage and reaffirm our faith --- peace and much love to dear friend -- JMW

Reviewed by Mitzi Jackson
Reviewed on November 18, 2008
Sounds like something we all can keep in mind truth always shines
Bravo

Reviewed by Jeanette Cooper
Reviewed on November 18, 2008
Well written, Karla. A very thoughtful piece. We stray, we hide, we see the light, then we find our way home--a Bibical truth.

Reviewed on November 18, 2008
KARLA - SUPERB!

Not unlike the well-known Scientific Method, one must first recognize that there is a problem - analyze and consider the alternatives involved - then reach the conclusion, or ANSWER.

The sheer acknowledgement of truly understanding the waywardness, is a GIANT STEP in following the LIGHTED PATH HOME!

Peace and Love - what else is so paramount? Tom.

Reviewed by Mr. Ed
Reviewed on November 18, 2008
Finding the way home - what a marvelous feeling!

Reviewed by Michael Howard
Reviewed on November 18, 2008
Karla, A truly inspirational write that speaks so beautifully, on so many levels. God Bless.

Reviewed by Liana Margiva
Reviewed on November 18, 2008
WONDERFUL!!!!!!!!! 'Maybe it's a tear, cried from HIM to me'-------EXCELLENT!!!! I LOVE THIS!!!!!!!!!! Liana Margiva

Reviewed by Sheila Roy
Reviewed on November 18, 2008
Lovely, Karla. A beautiful message, delivered creatively! Love and Hugs,
Sheila

Reviewed on November 17, 2008
Beautiful write, Karla; and I love the piccy! Very well penned!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your twin, Karen Lynn. :D X0X0X0X0

Reviewed by William Bonilla
Reviewed on November 17, 2008
Outstanding write I must say Karla
Love & peace be with you

William

Reviewed by jude forese
Reviewed on November 17, 2008
emotionally reflective and motivating ... just a wonderful poetic endeavor ...

Reviewed by Felix Perry
Reviewed on November 17, 2008
This is one of your best ever Karla...such depth and heart put into it and so wonderfully expressed.
hugs
fee

Reviewed by RaeLynn Teller
Reviewed on November 17, 2008
Karla--been reading in silence but this piece just made me have to speak up. I can feel these words in my soul.
Just remember--the light is always on.
Good thing, too, because I am afraid of the dark.
Great emotion.
Smile--RaeLynn

Reviewed by Karen Palumbo
Reviewed on November 17, 2008
Karla, this is so beautiful and you touch on so many emotions that humbles one's soul....

Be always safe,
Karen

Reviewed by Rose Rideout
Reviewed on November 17, 2008
Your words are very heart touching, thank you dear for sharing.

Newfie hugs are on the way, Rose

Reviewed by John Flanagan
Reviewed on November 17, 2008
Karla,
Beautifully conceived and expressed, the father's regret at losing the prodigal child, the child's guilt and self-loathing and the hopes of reunion and redemption. A fine work.
John

Reviewed by Ed Matlack
Reviewed on November 17, 2008
I wanna steal, er, uh, I mean borrow that pic, it is awesome...as is this excellent poem...ed

Reviewed by Christine Alwin
Reviewed on November 17, 2008
Karla, you bring me to tears with this, simply breathtaking

Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on November 17, 2008
Karla, I agree with Cryssa,keep it up and you'll
have nowhere left to climb;-) Kudo's!

Love,
Eileen

Reviewed by Linda Law
Reviewed on November 17, 2008
Cheez I love your writings... thank you, lindalaw

Reviewed on November 17, 2008
Karla
This is beautiful thank you for sharing
In Christ's Love
Michelle~

Reviewed on November 17, 2008
Karla,

Please do . . . your poetic writes run deep with powerful emotions and hope - superb, always!!


Hugs,

Lance

Reviewed by Cryssa C
Reviewed on November 17, 2008
You know, Karla...your writing just keeps getting better and better! This has all the makings of gorgeously perfect poem...
Cryssa

Reviewed by Kate Burnside
Reviewed on November 17, 2008
... oh look... and He's left the doors wide open, too! :)) xx

This is tender and touching and gets right inside the heart of the woe-begone stray and the Father's anguish. I, for one, know these places well... of both words and picture! Home from home, I'd say. Bless you, xx

Reviewed by Bonnie May
Reviewed on November 17, 2008
He keeps it burning for you and all his children. Beautiful spiritual write. Love and hugs, Bonnie

Reviewed by Amber Moonstone
Reviewed on November 17, 2008
Very lovely poem, Karla, and the graphic is so perfect!
peace, love, and light,
Amber "V"

Reviewed by Paul Berube
Reviewed on November 17, 2008
You know the way home Karla. Well said.


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