see him sitting over there,
in that old beat up wheelchair,
he's looking out the window,
and on his face the sun glows,
holds a kool in his fingers,
the cloying smoke still lingers,
on his face there is stubble,
face looks as hard as rubble,
dressed in a hospital gown,
and i.v. tubing hangs down,
the nurse comes and interrupts,
she hands him pills and a cup,
she says, "it's time for your meds...
still have that pain in your head?"
nodding, he then takes the pills,
not quite trusting doctor's skills,
wishing for the thousandth time,
he hadn't stepped on that mine,
the shrapnel's still lodged inside,
docs won't remove it, besides
if they they try to take it out,
he could die...they have no doubt,
it's lodged right next to his spine,
he feels they won't take the time,
reads the paper as he sups,
needs a blanket, covers up,
lays down, he prepares to sleep,
hopes he doesn't dream too deep,
that's when the nightmares begin,
for this worn out veteran.
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let's resolve to take care of those
that fought for our freedoms...visit
a veteran in the hospital, & thank
him or her for their service. love
& (((HUGS))), karla. :)
powerful but needed write. it's a shame how we treat those who gave their lives so we could be free..pathetic!!! we owe our veterans a lot more than what we are currently given them; we owe them PLENTY!!!! thank you for remembering our veterans!! (((HUGS))) and love, your twin, karen lynn. :)
As a disabled Naval veteran, I applaud your subject and sentiments. The only nightmare worse than the suffering of servicemen, is the apathy too many hold for those who've given so much to preserve everyone's right to apathy--and freedom. Excellent write.
hm.......do you think it'll ever happen we are too busy taking care of everyone else...you know
well needed write!!!
Reviewed by Connie Hinnen Cook (Reader)
Reviewed on September 13, 2002
So sad..that's when the nightmares begin. This one will hopefully make folks remember our brave veterans. They deserve more recognition from us! Thanks for this one, Karla!
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well needed write!!!