there he is
lying there under the sheets
been watching
he is my next *tasty* treat
there he is
at peace (he thinks he's safe) WRONG!!!!
been watching
to me alone he belongs
there he is
my victim is fast asleep
been watching
his breath is even and deep
there he is
what tortures can i devise
i'm watching
what terrors be his demise
there he is
i've been watching him for weeks
i'm watching
his nighttimes are what i seek
there he is
and he doesn't know i'm there
i'm watching
because i'm his worst nightmare!!!! :0
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ah-hahahahahahahaha *deep vincent price
type laughter* (i loved vincent price...his
voice and laughter was enough to give me
the serious creeps! he is missed...*tears*)
to jay chattin...the "master of creep." :)
you *know* i love you...even though your
halloween writes are giving me nightmares...
THANKS A LOT!!!! :0 *screaming* :)
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Reviews of "next victim (fictional)--FOR JAY CHATTIN"
first jay, and now YOU?? oh, nooooooo!!!!!!
scary write!! >goosebumps poppin' up atop my original goosebumps < love, your (freaked out) twink, karen lynn. ((((HUGS)))) :0
Reviewed by na na (Reader)
Reviewed on October 23, 2002
I think you piced out the right victim for this one. Bill
nice writing
Jenni
Jack
i would tell him but i know "you will be watching
scary write!! >goosebumps poppin' up atop my original goosebumps < love, your (freaked out) twink, karen lynn. ((((HUGS)))) :0