I can't believe you're gone--it's like you've never left
But you are no longer here, and I am bereft
You were taken from me one black September day
You would still be here with me, IF I HAD MY WAY
I still hear your voice call out my name
I still play all our favorite games
I still wear your pajamas at night
I still look out at the city lights
I still smell your sweet, sexy cologne
I still have your message on the phone
I still wear the necklace you gave me
I still talk to all your family
Can't believe it has been over a year
I still miss you...I wish you were here
I still listen to our special songs
I still like Chinese--still eat at Wong's
I still feel your tender, warm embrace
I still see your rugged, handsome face
I still look at your pictures...and cry
I still can't believe you had to die
I still feel abandoned, all alone
I still feel the grief, down to my bones
I can't believe you're gone--it's like you've never left
But you are no longer here, and I am bereft
You were taken from me one black September day
You would still be here with me, IF I HAD MY WAY
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The words to this song came to me during
the night. I woke up and had to write them
down, before they were forgotten. (Now, if
only I had a melody!)
"always remember and never, ever forget"
(((HUGS))) and love, karla. :(
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Reviewed by susie weiler (Reader)
Reviewed on December 4, 2002
When we lose people we love, all we are lft with are the memories we have made together, even the small things we did are engrained in our hearts. Take time to live and to love...Bring happiness to those you love, Geat topic, makes us stop and think.
An amazing and powerful write, this deserves higer than a ten, even higher than a hundred, you did a wonderful job! Hugz Your Friend In Cali ~Michelle~
This deserves a 10. Sometimes I do believe we give out 10s out of courtesy, but this is definately one piece that deserves a 100%! This took my breath away and made my eyes water, for I often don't cry I have a hard heart, ha ha.
This is wonderful. I do think you should send this to people, people from the WTC and everything. That is beautiful. It's as if you lived it yourself. This is so moving and powerful. I can't stop raving about it :)
powerful write; this would make a very good song! sad, though, as september 11 was (and still is for a lot of us). may we never forget, and always remember! love, your twin, karen lynn. ((((HUGS))) :( >tears <
This is a *100++* I think for the melody, you should let each person play their own melody in their head as they read your beautiful work.
Hugs,
The Voice
This is wonderful. I do think you should send this to people, people from the WTC and everything. That is beautiful. It's as if you lived it yourself. This is so moving and powerful. I can't stop raving about it :)