wishes (in two parts--for kaci's challenge) (poem) by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner on AuthorsDen

Reviewed by Kate Clifford (Reader)

Reviewed on December 16, 2002

Wonderful wish's and enjoy your star watching and wishing.

Reviewed by Ellen DuBois (Reader)

Reviewed on December 16, 2002

Karla,
I loved this. Your wishes reflect your beautiful soul. I do agree, you shouldn't be so hard on yourself. May all your wishes come true and them some!
(((((Hugs and Merry Christmas))))
Ellen

Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado

Reviewed on December 16, 2002

wonderful wishes you have, karla! i hope they all come true for you! with much love, your twin, karen lynn. (((HUGS))) :)

Reviewed by La Belle Rouge (Reader)

Reviewed on December 16, 2002

I wish they would all come true, Sweet Friend.

Reviewed by na na (Reader)

Reviewed on December 15, 2002

What a great response Karla to Kaci's challenge. You have no trouble responding cause you heart is always filled with love for others and you keep positive thoughts in your mind and heart. Love you (((hugs)))
Bill Murray

Reviewed by Amor Sabor

Reviewed on December 15, 2002

May all your wishes come true for you Karla. My, but you do have quite a long list!! :)
Amor

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes

Reviewed on December 15, 2002

I wish i could meet you in person....
and i wish i could send you a cheetha.....
but i can send you a kiss..........lol
love
Tinka

Reviewed by jing javier

Reviewed on December 14, 2002

well, wishes do come true.. =)

Reviewed by Jack Roberts

Reviewed on December 14, 2002

I hope your wishes all come true. Nice write Karla.
Jack

Reviewed by E T Waldron

Reviewed on December 14, 2002

What great wishes, I'll sign on to those;-) wonderful write Karla!!!

Reviewed by Michelle Kidwell Power In The Pen

Reviewed on December 14, 2002

Wow this is great, keep it up! Your Friend In Cali
~Michelle~
Hugz

Reviewed by Hooves Of Fire (Reader)

Reviewed on December 14, 2002

Very fine wishes and very well written.
Hooves of Fire/CovertCow

Reviewed by Thelma Shutters (Reader)

Reviewed on December 14, 2002

Karla, I wish that Everyone of your wishes come true, Because they sound just like what I would wish for. Great Write. Thelma

Reviewed by Linda Hill

Reviewed on December 14, 2002

Great write Karla.
I wish all of your wishes
could come true. What a
joyous world we would have.
Huggggggs

Reviewed by Kacie Rahm

Reviewed on December 14, 2002

OK, now what you have to do, is make all those wishes new years resolutions (the ones about you) and every time you break one, you have to take something you like about you off your list, and add one you don't lik to ur not like list. When you do something good, you add to your goodlist, and take one away from ur bad list. See how many goods and bads you have at the end of the year! good luck!

Reviewed by ♥ Kari Hirshey ♥ (Reader)

Reviewed on December 14, 2002

haha, great write, but me thinks that anyone who can come up with so clever a poem doesn't need these lines :
i wish i were more appreciated
i wish i were smarter
great write tho. :)
~Kari~