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Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner

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grief--FICTION (WARNING--strong language)
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i came to see you again today
did you see me standing there
i stood there for hours by your grave
this has been such a nightmare--

i've been told i must get on with life
but they just don't understand
i wasn't ready to say good-bye
taken from me by madmen--

we worked together for all these years
the brother i never had
in you i confided hope and fears
i hope your killers are glad--

they don't realize how much you meant
how precious you were to me
your death i find abhorent
you died, leading others to safety--

i freaked, when i saw it on the news
i was at home, sick in bed
that awful day, when terror ensued
oh, God...how many are dead?

a fireman, one hell of a man
my partner, friend, my brother
buddy, you were superman
i was the one to tell your mother--

you were murdered when the towers fell
what were your last moments like
can't help but think, it must have been hell
goddammit, i miss you, mike--
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"always remember and never, ever forget."

(((HUGS))) and love,

karla. :(

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 Reviews of "grief--FICTION (WARNING--strong language)"
Reviewed by jude forese
Reviewed on January 6, 2003
know where you're coming from...

Reviewed by Lori Maynard
Reviewed on January 6, 2003
Very powerful! I liked the last stanza the most. I can sense the anger expressed.

Lori

Reviewed by Kate Clifford (Reader)
Reviewed on January 6, 2003
Never forgotten. Nice write.

Reviewed by Ted Sheridan (Reader)
Reviewed on January 6, 2003
I am still pissed over this.

Reviewed by Nicole Davis Vergara (Reader)
Reviewed on January 5, 2003
<Crying> We shall never forget Karla...NEVER!
So sad and lovely...felt your pain and emotion! ((((Huggles))))
~Nikki~

Reviewed by Oisín Breen (Reader)
Reviewed on January 5, 2003
I think its good. I dont think its excellent yet. But i did enjoy it. Keep up the writing

Reviewed by Marilyn Seray
Reviewed on January 5, 2003
sad write well written Karla

Reviewed on January 5, 2003
Another sad, heartwrenching, but well done piece, I will never forget!
In Chist's Love
~Michelle~
(((((hugz)))))

Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on January 5, 2003
Another wonderful write!

Reviewed by Deborah Carter
Reviewed on January 5, 2003
Karla it is so sad, and yet he died a hero doing what he was trained to do. With a purpose that drove him onward. Not in vain like so many lives are wasted. God bless you. Deb

Reviewed by Lady Peg (Reader)
Reviewed on January 5, 2003
Oh sweetie this is so sad and heartfelt
Peg

Reviewed by Jack Roberts
Reviewed on January 5, 2003
Great write Karla! We will always remember that horrible day.
Jack

Reviewed by TRASK
Reviewed on January 5, 2003
1-05-03

Truly, They Do Know You (Care) Are/Were There!

TRASK

Reviewed by James David Compton (Reader)
Reviewed on January 5, 2003
We will remember...

Reviewed by Cathy Montgomery (Reader)
Reviewed on January 5, 2003
Oh my...this is so sad and heartwrenching just as Karen said. You write about that horrible, horrible day as if you were actually there. Great write, deeply felt...

Reviewed on January 5, 2003
so sad, this write! heartwrenching and emotional in its content! may we never forget; the anger is clearly evident, and too many people still feel that anger today! thanks for sharing this powerful piece! with much love, your twin, karen lynn. (((HUGS))) :( >tears <


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