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Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner

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when the smoke ran like water
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when the smoke ran like water
that day of the terrorist strike
it affected all of us
it forever altered our psyche

when the smoke ran like water
advancing like an evil thing
chasing people down the streets
in nightmares, the image clings

when the smoke ran like water
marring an otherwise blue sky
we could not help but wonder
oh, God...how many have just died

when the smoke ran like water
an evil, pyroclastic flow
storming across the landscape
like a blizzard of dirty snow

when the smoke ran like water
obscuring all in bitter ash
suddenly, day turned to night
when the mighty twin towers collapsed

when the smoke ran like water
pouring through the hole in our heart
don't think we'll get over it...
it ripped all of our lives apart

when the smoke ran like water
it got into all of our eyes
tears poured down, never to end
we were left numb and paralyzed
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"always remember and never forget"

(((HUGS))) and love,

karla. :(

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 Reviews of "when the smoke ran like water"
Reviewed on January 7, 2003
I will never forget those images, or this poem, heartwrenching, but so well said.
((((Karla)))))
Your Friend
~Michelle~

Reviewed by Lady Peg (Reader)
Reviewed on January 7, 2003
Hello this was very good. Hugs Peggy

Reviewed by The Voice (Reader)
Reviewed on January 7, 2003
Karla,
Very special write! From one who served for years as a volunteer fire fighter, I pray every day that the "River of Smoke" never flows again....

Hugs,

The Voice

Reviewed by Erin Kelly-Moen
Reviewed on January 7, 2003
:( Oh, karla, this was so wrenching...I will never forget that day. (((Hugs))) to the world.

Reviewed by John Quinn (Reader)
Reviewed on January 7, 2003
Another beautiful and haunting poem Karla.

Love John

Reviewed by Mari Laureano (Reader)
Reviewed on January 7, 2003
and still it bleeds. awesome poem and sentiment...you know how deeply I relate...**Mari**

Reviewed by Tien Avielle (Reader)
Reviewed on January 7, 2003
well put, Karla - but the paralysis has passed ... now some are fearful, others vengeful - for me, I live in fear of what the vengeful may bring.

Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on January 7, 2003
Karla, you just get better and better! this is brilliant!Bravo!

Reviewed on January 7, 2003
"when the smoke ran like water"..that's just how it looked like to me, and i will never forget those horrifying images as long as i live! very vivid and powerful poem! may we always remember the 11th of september, and god bless america again! >tears < with much love, your twin, karen lynn. ((((HUGS)))) :(


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