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it couldn't have been
by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner → (All Poetry by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner)
  
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i thought i saw you today
and it gave me quite a start...
honestly thought it was you
but no, it couldn't have been
the same stunning brunette hair
you was wearin' your green dress
with the angora sweater
but no...it couldn't have been
your eyes were one of a kind
golden--amber colored eyes
one look and you were gone, man
but no...it couldn't have been
you had a way of walkin'
ladylike...yet confident
i could watch you for hours
but no...it couldn't have been
no...it couldn't have been you.

memories came flooding back
of the last time i saw you
you gettin' ready for work
runnin' a brush through your hair
wearin' your lovely green dress
with the angora sweater
smilin' at me with those eyes
a lovely golden amber
intense...capturing my heart
everytime i looked in them
one look...i was gone, man, gone
struttin' like you owned the place
yet demure...a real lady
you worked at the trade towers
i lost you that september
when they collapsed to the ground
and i waited and waited
i waited for many months
prayin'...hopin' against hope
prayin' you'd survive...knowin'
that you probably didn't...
i wanted to know somethin'
but dreadin' the moment, too
when they'd tell me they found you

i thought i saw you today...
but no...it couldn't have been
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this is respectfully dedicated to family members and friends of those lost in the attacks of september 11, 2001.

"always remember and never forget."

*tears,* (((HUGS))) and love,

karla. :(

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 Reviews of "it couldn't have been"
Reviewed on January 20, 2003
outstanding write, karla! powerful stuff here! *NEVER FORGET* love, your twin sister, karen lynn. ((((HUGS)))) i love you with all my heart, and i hope you know that! :)

Reviewed on January 13, 2003
Another beautiful yet hearbreaking write, God Bless you
~Michelle~

Reviewed by Connie Hinnen Cook (Reader)
Reviewed on January 12, 2003
Beautiful write.

Reviewed by John Quinn (Reader)
Reviewed on January 12, 2003
You captured my feelings perfectly Karla....another beautiful poem.

Love John

Reviewed by Erin Kelly-Moen
Reviewed on January 12, 2003
God, Karla, this piece bites chunks out of my heart...

:(

Reviewed by Lady Peg (Reader)
Reviewed on January 11, 2003
I am now sitting in tears thgis touched
Hugs
Peg

Reviewed by Lisa Hilbers
Reviewed on January 11, 2003
Karla, So many pictures came flooding back in while I read this. Everytime I think things are going to dim the pain for that day, something always brings them flooding back in with a vengence. Thank You,,maybe this inspiration to make sure I don't forget is what I needed,,,,Thanks Karla,,,Lisa

Reviewed by Jenni Kalicharan
Reviewed on January 11, 2003
oh grrl...this is so touching... *wipes a tear*
Jenni

Reviewed by - - - - - TRASK
Reviewed on January 11, 2003
1-11-03

As All Thing's Are Contained In Your Sub Conscious Mind From Day 1...

Yres, TRASK

Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on January 11, 2003
your portrayal of this event is always kleenex time, and always worth it!...love to you...Eileen

Reviewed by J John (Reader)
Reviewed on January 11, 2003
:(( excellant write Karla .. j


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