im feelin mighty low (FICTION *) (poem) by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner on AuthorsDen

Reviewed by judeace

Reviewed on April 23, 2003

sometimes we can learn much from being depressed...

Reviewed on April 22, 2003

good write on depression, glad you rose above it...nice inspirational example Karla...

Reviewed by Jason Ganey (Reader)

Reviewed on April 22, 2003

Depression can be a nasty thing, have had my battles with it before, enjoyed the read and your right, if we stick it out things do get better

Reviewed by Lady Peg (Reader)

Reviewed on April 22, 2003

Hi sweetie never give up so glad it was fictional life is too short.
Love you
Peggy

Reviewed by Erica Ivory

Reviewed on April 22, 2003

YES... YOU HAVE MADE TO THE OTHER SIDE OF THE MOUNTAIN... GREAT WRITE!

Reviewed by Elizabeth Taylor (Reader)

Reviewed on April 22, 2003

thoughtful...

Reviewed by Sandie May Joyce (Sandie Angel)

Reviewed on April 22, 2003

This was good write. I'm glad you didn't take your own life.

Sandie Angel :o)

Reviewed by Josephine Bohen

Reviewed on April 22, 2003

fiction or no, it rings of truth
this is a mark of a great writer
proud to call you friend
josie

Reviewed by Kate Clifford (Reader)

Reviewed on April 22, 2003

Your compassion for others show with this write. I know this feeling too. Woke up the other day feeling this way for reasons I won't go into but today I saw a beautiful dove flying and reminded myself that life does have treasures.

Reviewed by the phantom pheonix (Reader)

Reviewed on April 22, 2003

i have those days of giving up we just have to struggle on and that what I am doing trust me giving up is not the answer its just coward way out I SO GLAD this fiction but what fantastic fiction it is

Reviewed by Ron (sketchman) Axelson (Reader)

Reviewed on April 22, 2003

Life can get better
I know it's fiction, but you
do feel this way sometimes?
We all have. [[[[[[HUGS]]]]]]

Reviewed by Jacqueline VanZandbeek (Reader)

Reviewed on April 22, 2003

God is only as far away as you push Him!
To you, God was not listening (at times) but He was, and I think you already know that.
Excellent write! Most days that IS how I feel. This poem may be fictional to you but not to me.
Jacqueline xoxo

Reviewed by Retta (Reindeer) Mckenzie

Reviewed on April 22, 2003

This was wonderful...Gives me hope..

Excellent,

Reindeer

Reviewed by Netta Jack (Reader)

Reviewed on April 22, 2003

AWESOME!!!! I felt this one. LOVED IT!!! And kudos for the honesty, you are both brave and inspirational!!!

Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado

Reviewed on April 22, 2003

((((karla)))) i have been there, too, but in a way, i HAVEN'T. i haven't had to put up with a husband who belittled me or never had a child i eventually had to give up through NO fault of my own, i never had to go into the military or face surgery the way you did, and i never had to go on disability (tried; denied though!). you have gone through so much hell in your life; now it is time you have some HEAVEN in your life! it is time that god hears the cries of your heart and acts upon them! sure, we both would love for him to act on our requests NOW, but he WILL do so in HIS time! we both just have to learn to be patient is all; even though it IS hard! i know! and i hope you NEVER, EVER give up; you are too strong of a person to do so! i love you with all my heart! (((((HUGS)))) and MUCHO love, your twink, karen lynn. :) GOD BLESS YOU, KARLA; YOU DESERVE ALL THE BLESSINGS HE CAN GIVE YOU! :) heartfelt, emotion-filled write; so well done! outstanding job on this! :)

Reviewed by Ed G Rhea

Reviewed on April 22, 2003

Hang in there. God answers prays in his own time when the time is right. If it weren't for bad how could we appreciate the good? I kow how you feel though as many of us have gone through what you have, but time heals all wounds.