Listen! Listen close:
God's Voice lingers on the breeze--
It tickles your ear.
He calls out your name:
Take a moment to listen--
What is He saying?
God is very pleased:
He takes great delight in you,
You are His Child.
When you hurt, He hurts:
In troubled times, He answers...
He is your comfort.
God loves you, you know:
He created the whole world,
It's His Gift to you.
He talks through Nature:
Sometimes softly, sometimes loud--
Harken to His Voice.
Listen! Listen close:
God loves to make you smile,
Because He loves you.
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Reviews of "God's Voice (A Haiku Chain)"
Reviewed by Dwayne Pagnotto (Reader)
Reviewed on June 5, 2003
Dear Karla,
This poem i know touched many hearts, as it did mine. It is very lovely, and written with great emotional conviction, kinda makes the reader wanna pause here, and listen to what God is saying right at this moment, thru your words. It is like a cool resting place under a shadey tree, one feels refreshed after their brief stay here, and finds it rather hard to leave, as i do now. I just love it karla. Thank you for this one.
Reviewed by Cathy Montgomery (Reader)
Reviewed on May 23, 2003
This is wonderful--love this beautiful uplifting "haiku chain". Touches my soul deeply...
p.s. Missed reading your and your sweet sister's writings!!
Hi Karla, great poem. I love it. But tell me: What if God does not answer to my prayers or quesions? Maybe we should talk about this sometimes. Good work. Love. S.
Reviewed by Bill Sowman
Reviewed on May 22, 2003
Karla, I think the greatest tribute I can pay to you and your poetry is this: God lives in your words and comes alive in my heart when I read them and makes me want to shout for joy. Chills are running down my spine now. Oh how I would hate to see you go from Ad. Always bring this joy to us please. HHHHUUUUUUUgggggsss!! Bill
Reviewed by Joseph* OneLight*® (Reader)
Reviewed on May 22, 2003
Karla, This piece was like the voice of a prophet speaking. Outstanding!
I have written a chapter called I Am That, I Am in this inspirational compilation book by best-selling authors and wonderful people from all walks of life xox :-D (Its sister book is called Adventures In Manifesting - Success and Spirituality)
This poem i know touched many hearts, as it did mine. It is very lovely, and written with great emotional conviction, kinda makes the reader wanna pause here, and listen to what God is saying right at this moment, thru your words. It is like a cool resting place under a shadey tree, one feels refreshed after their brief stay here, and finds it rather hard to leave, as i do now. I just love it karla. Thank you for this one.
p.s. Missed reading your and your sweet sister's writings!!
Reindeer
~Joseph
Love you, dove
Hugs,
The Voice