a pocket full of memories (poem) by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner on AuthorsDen

Reviewed by Dwayne Pagnotto (Reader)

Reviewed on June 5, 2003

This is a really touching piece karla. but...it's light-hearted at the same time. It shows you have real talent when you can write something, and it makes people feel two different ways at once. Great job on this. Keep up the good work!

Reviewed by Abdi-Noor Mohamed (Eagle Of Hope)

Reviewed on May 25, 2003

I am black but when times are rough, when you are feeling sad pull me out because I am white inside. Thank you Karla. I always feel inspired or touched in one way or the other when I read your poems.
abdinoor

Reviewed by Nicole Lasher

Reviewed on May 24, 2003

Heheheh...Life is like one of those bags of miscellaneous marbles that are sometimes given as party favors. We get it for free, never know what the mix is going to contain when we open it, and there is alot of fishtank filler, but usually at least one or two good cat eyes and sparklies :)

Reviewed by Rodney Bohen

Reviewed on May 24, 2003

Karla,
Pretty nice words Id say......
Rodney Evan Bohen

embedded
like quartz
on the bottom of
a riverbed
memories
stud the road
of my mind

Reviewed by OnepoetGem *the Poetic Rapper

Reviewed on May 24, 2003

No they aren't Karla. And we should learn to enjoy life until they get really bad, very good writing. I like your style. lovu Grady

Reviewed by La Belle Rouge (Reader)

Reviewed on May 24, 2003

Karla this one is one of your best.

Reviewed by na na (Reader)

Reviewed on May 24, 2003

Yes dear Karla, things aern't so bad ... when you weigh all the good versus bad memories. This poem is so deep and reflective of life. Beautiful poem an beautiful Lady. Love you kitten. Bill

Reviewed by Dens Dreamweaver (Reader)

Reviewed on May 24, 2003

I think this is one of your best sweetie.. I really love the way this one flows as well as the whole meaning behind it.. Excellent!! Kudo's to you hun. Love ya..

Melanie

Reviewed by m w

Reviewed on May 24, 2003

Never are things as bad as they seem or as bad as they could be. Beautiful quartz like friends there for you to touch in times of need.

Keep 'em coming xoxox

Reviewed by Erica Ivory

Reviewed on May 24, 2003

Inspiration at it's finest.. Perhaps I will try your way

Love Erica

Reviewed by Bianca Boonstra (Reader)

Reviewed on May 23, 2003

Excellent :-)

Reviewed by Dove (Reader)

Reviewed on May 23, 2003

{{{Sister Karla}}}
loved this beauty write!!!
Yes, all memories are to bring us into more awareness, which is a gift..!

Love you,
Dove

Reviewed by Charles Mann (Reader)

Reviewed on May 23, 2003

may your pockets always be filled with "white ones",,excellent,Charlie

Reviewed by jude forese

Reviewed on May 23, 2003

great flow!

Reviewed by - - - - - TRASK

Reviewed on May 23, 2003

5-23-03

Better N No Memories . All!

TRASK

Reviewed by Ron (sketchman) Axelson (Reader)

Reviewed on May 23, 2003

Wow karla, this is an awesome write
I'll choose the white ones too
Just leave the black ones because,
by holding on to a black one won't change it's color
Your friend.........Ron

Reviewed by E T Waldron

Reviewed on May 23, 2003

This is an excellent write Karla, Kudo's

Reviewed by Lady Peg (Reader)

Reviewed on May 23, 2003

Oh this is wonderful sweetie.
Peggy

Reviewed by Carolyn Red Bear (The Bear Paw)

Reviewed on May 23, 2003

Me, too, Karla!!!!! Love this....
-Bear

Reviewed by Elizabeth Taylor (Reader)

Reviewed on May 23, 2003

I love this. Bravo. Well done. I like this style for you.

Reviewed by Nicole Davis Vergara (Reader)

Reviewed on May 23, 2003

Awesome Work Karla! You are so right my dear friend, if only we could keep the good ones and throw away the bad YET we learn our hardest and often best lessons from the bad ones so they are needed in that important sense!
((((Hugs))))
~Nikki~

Reviewed by Kay P Devenish

Reviewed on May 23, 2003

Beautiful.

Reviewed by Robert Blackwell (Reader)

Reviewed on May 23, 2003

Awesome, my friend!

Reviewed by Debby Rosenberg

Reviewed on May 23, 2003

inspirational...thank you

Reviewed by Leland Waldrip

Reviewed on May 23, 2003

I like this. Cool!
Leland