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where my heart used to be
by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner → (All Poetry by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner)
  
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i've cried all the tears i can cry
i think my resevoir's run dry
now there is just an empty sea
where my heart used to be

cried all i could--can't cry no more
my tears, part of the ocean's roar
now there is just a silent sea
where my heart used to be

i lost you that september day
the mem'ries sting like salty spray
flung in the air by stormy seas
where my heart used to be

the towers fell, with you inside
i watched...that's when part of me died
a chasm opened, drained the seas
where my heart used to be

dammit--why did you have to die
i did not want to say goodbye
now sadness lurks o'er gloomy seas
where my heart used to be

i see you, hear you, feel you, too
as the memory tapes are cued
you're free to play in endless seas
where my heart longs to be
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ALWAYS REMEMBER AND NEVER FORGET. :(


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 Reviews of "where my heart used to be"
Reviewed by Liana Margiva
Reviewed on March 11, 2008
ONE OF THE MOST BEAUTIFUL POEMS, WHICH I READ IN MY LIFE!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Liana Margiva

Reviewed by Robert Blackwell (Reader)
Reviewed on June 19, 2003
Another wonderful write to commemorate a terrible day.

Reviewed by Kate Clifford (Reader)
Reviewed on June 16, 2003
Very sad and beautiful tribute.

Reviewed on June 16, 2003
Karla, what a tribute! Thank you for sharing it...
In Spirit,
Bear

Reviewed by Calendula Petal (Reader)
Reviewed on June 16, 2003
just so sad, bought a lump to my throat. A little 4 year old said to me about Sept 11th recently.....it was so unfair wasnt it...I could only reply, yes.
This was so moving.

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Reviewed on June 16, 2003
Very sad moving poem!!

Reviewed by Joseph* OneLight*® (Reader)
Reviewed on June 16, 2003
So beautifully written Karla.

~Joseph

Reviewed by Bhuwan Thapaliya
Reviewed on June 16, 2003
Karla....outstanding write...Hugs...BHUWAN

Reviewed on June 16, 2003
I agree with Ed enter it into a poetry contest it's a wonderful piece, sad yet tender..
God Bless
~Michelle~

Reviewed on June 15, 2003
This was excellent and so well expressed, just really got to me tonight,

Reindeer

Reviewed by Dens Dreamweaver (Reader)
Reviewed on June 15, 2003
Beautiful tribute - and reminder - to never forget. My deepest prayer is that some day this world can come together and unite in peace.. So there will never again be another 9-11

Love you sweetie
Melanie

Reviewed by Ted Sheridan (Reader)
Reviewed on June 15, 2003
Well done

Reviewed by Lady Peg (Reader)
Reviewed on June 15, 2003
Karla, this is so sad sweetie.
{{hugs}}
Peggy

Reviewed on June 15, 2003
Oh Karla, this is so sad, but a very wonderful poem. ~Kerry

Reviewed by Ron (sketchman) Axelson (Reader)
Reviewed on June 15, 2003
You do these so well
your fiend Ron

Reviewed by Kay P Devenish
Reviewed on June 15, 2003
Very Sad moving poem.
Excellent work!!

Reviewed by Birdie Houston (Reader)
Reviewed on June 15, 2003
Beautiful write Karla mellow

Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on June 15, 2003
Excellent and beautifully expressed Karla!

Reviewed by E. Richardson
Reviewed on June 15, 2003
Very well done...let's all pray that such things never be forgotten.

Reviewed by La Belle Rouge (Reader)
Reviewed on June 15, 2003
Powerful and heartfelt, Karla.

Reviewed by Lisa Hilbers
Reviewed on June 15, 2003
Karla, Your heart is safe, we'll all meet up with them again someday. In the mean time we'll keep their memory alive by Never Forgetting what took place that day. Great write...~SH~

Reviewed on June 15, 2003
Very heartfelt write Karla! Well-expressed good longings.

May Lu a.k.a. Sandie Angel :o)

Reviewed by Tony Nerone (Reader)
Reviewed on June 15, 2003
Hi Karla, Wonderfully Written!

tony:)

Reviewed by Ronald Hull
Reviewed on June 15, 2003
A drop at a time makes an ocean. A thought at a time expresses an emotion. Well said.

Reviewed by Elizabeth Taylor (Reader)
Reviewed on June 15, 2003
Beautiful work.

Reviewed by - - - - - TRASK
Reviewed on June 15, 2003
6-15-03

Believe You Will be Together In The End_
You Have a Kind Heart...

TRASK

Reviewed on June 15, 2003
heartwrenching write; well done, sweetie! :( >tears < "we will NEVER forget!" (((HUGS))) and love, your twin, karen lynn. incredible imagery in this powerful write!


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