a father's prayer (poem) by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner on AuthorsDen

Reviewed by A Serviceable Villain

Reviewed on October 17, 2008

Karla,

An exceptionally beautiful write . . . loved this one!!

Hugs,

Lance

Reviewed by Margo Snyder

Reviewed on April 9, 2007

Beautiful prayer. I am sorry for your loss dear Karla. He is in
God's hands. God bless you Margo

Reviewed by Marco Landi (Reader)

Reviewed on June 29, 2003

sad awful September day ....
Thanks Karla

Reviewed by Bhuwan Thapaliya

Reviewed on June 29, 2003

Excellent...clap clap clap....BHUWAN

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes

Reviewed on June 28, 2003

Yip I am awake....lol!!
This one is so sad Karla but well done!!

Love
Tinka

Reviewed by - - - - - TRASK

Reviewed on June 28, 2003

6-28-03

Excellent_

TRASK

Reviewed by Michelle Elliott (Reader)

Reviewed on June 28, 2003

I hope you aren't the father, but someone is, isn't he? Touching write.
-Michelle

Reviewed by E T Waldron

Reviewed on June 28, 2003

Very touching, deeply felt results of the tragedy. Well done Karla!

Reviewed by Michelle Kidwell Power In The Pen

Reviewed on June 28, 2003

This was a beautifull hearfelt write, keep up the great work!
God Bless
~Michelle~

Reviewed by Dove (Reader)

Reviewed on June 28, 2003

This speaks to me so much..What a voice of fathers light you are..What a beautiful channel of a vessel you are, sister..

Love you,
Dove

Reviewed by Trixie Love

Reviewed on June 28, 2003

Oh Karla,
What a heartfelt write...
Beautiful and filed with
such emotions...
No, A parent shoul never
out live their child...
But unfortunately it happens...
Hope you and Karen had a
happy birthday...:)

Love & hugs
Trixie :)

Reviewed by David Alexander, Sr. (Reader)

Reviewed on June 28, 2003

Wonderful my LiL Sis. It turly is. Please visit this URL it is a tribute to my father. God Bless..Poppa aka David
http://www.geocities.com/kyvietnamvet/Elbert_O_Alexander_My_Dad.html?

Reviewed by Brittany Ren�e

Reviewed on June 28, 2003

Wow, so endearing, Karla. Very insightful, sad, tender. Touches a soft spot on every soul, but even more on some than others. Good tribute. Good write. Beautiful prayer.

Warm Love
*Brittany Renee*

Reviewed by Robert Blackwell (Reader)

Reviewed on June 28, 2003

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Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado

Reviewed on June 28, 2003

>tears, tears, tears < oh, what a heartwrenching write; this tore me up inside and caused me to get misty-eyed!~ you sure know how to tug at the heartstrings; what a powerful, emotional write! (((HUGS))) and love, your twin, karen lynn. :(