a second chance (poem) by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner on AuthorsDen

Reviewed on June 15, 2004

God will give us more than once chance to do some good in this despairing world .

Beautiful write Karla--Touching

Peter Paton

Reviewed by Henry Lefevre

Reviewed on March 24, 2004

Great advice.

Reviewed by serenety L (Reader)

Reviewed on August 2, 2003

A great one Karla.
You are so right.
We often concentrate on things that are not worth it. We should set priorities
Love
Nico

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes

Reviewed on July 31, 2003

excellent!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by Nicole Davis Vergara (Reader)

Reviewed on July 31, 2003

A beautiful heartfelt turthful write full of much wisdom that all should take and utilize...and I must say Karla I am glad in this my second chance I have gotten to know you of sorts!!!!
((((Hugs))))
~Nikki~

Reviewed by Joseph* OneLight*� (Reader)

Reviewed on July 31, 2003

Karla,

You have a wonderful heart. Wouldn't the world be a beautiful place if everyone lived this way?

~Joseph

Reviewed by Trish - The Trickster

Reviewed on July 31, 2003

Truthful and exceptional write.

Reviewed by Masood Lohar

Reviewed on July 31, 2003

YOu have a nice soul. This is really wonderful.. "Share the wealth"... isn't it a shame for human kind that the poors are in majority. I appreciate your spirit and the line of thinking... Masood

Reviewed by *********** ********** (Reader)

Reviewed on July 30, 2003

Beautiful Karla....I agree with Eileen..You should be very proud of your work..It is wonderful.....ty, Dani

Reviewed by Debra Stiles, The Original Mister (Reader)

Reviewed on July 30, 2003

That was said divinly :)
thanks, I needed that
Mister

Reviewed by E T Waldron

Reviewed on July 30, 2003

This is pure excellence Karla! Bravo!!! You know what's important!

Reviewed by Bhuwan Thapaliya

Reviewed on July 30, 2003

wow....wonderful write!!!

Reviewed by Carolyn Red Bear (The Bear Paw)

Reviewed on July 30, 2003

Karla, thank you for the wonderful reminder! Every moment is a second chance to give a helping hand! You are a blessing...
In Spirit,
Bear

Reviewed by - - - - - TRASK

Reviewed on July 30, 2003

Excellent_

But, Give Some One a Helping Hand!

TRASK

Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado

Reviewed on July 30, 2003

Lovely write with a good message of hope behind it!

"when you read these
words, bring joy to
someone's life--just
forget yourself
be a blessing."

love this inspirational piece!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your twin, karen lynn. :D

Reviewed by Kate Clifford (Reader)

Reviewed on July 30, 2003

Wonderful suggestions!