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ash-covered streets ( fiction )
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i wander ash-covered streets
and don't see another living soul
am i the only one left
as awful, unending silence tolls

the smokey, dust coated air
makes it very difficult to breathe
i wander ash-covered streets
inside my heart, sorrow starts to wreathe

why did my friends have to die
understand, i'm no better than them
i wander ash-covered streets
of a city deserted, condemned

i had gone to work that day
just like i had always done before
ash-covered buildings and streets
lie broken...damaged...i'm heartsore

buildings emerge through the haze
the poisoned, thickened air starts to clear
and silent, ash-covered streets
catches the dust mingled with my tears

someone calls in the distance
is there anyone alive out there
help comes to ash-covered streets
two firemen tend to me with care

it's been almost two years now
since that awful september morning
i still see ash-covered streets
when my life was changed without warning

(c) karla dorman, 2003
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ALWAYS REMEMBER AND NEVER FORGET


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 Reviews of "ash-covered streets ( fiction )"
Reviewed on August 11, 2003
This was excellent Karla, outstandingly written, we will never foget..

Reindeer

Reviewed by Handsum Hart
Reviewed on August 11, 2003
forget never, remember always, such I fine poem you have written. peace

Reviewed by La Belle Rouge (Reader)
Reviewed on August 11, 2003
Good write Karla, we won't forget.

Reviewed on August 11, 2003
An excellent write...is the caps button broken? LOL

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Reviewed on August 11, 2003
splendid write Karla!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by Jaclynn Huntington (Reader)
Reviewed on August 10, 2003
Another well written reminder of what we should not forget.
~Jackie~

Reviewed by David Alexander, Sr. (Reader)
Reviewed on August 10, 2003
Karla, May I post this in PSWW or will you. It is great and all of the members would love to read it and I would like permission to post it on the Group Web Site.. I would still love for you to join us.... Love you..
Poppa aka David
P.S. The URL to the Web site is below on this e-mail..
http://poppadavid.homestead.com/HomePage.html

Reviewed by Nicole Davis Vergara (Reader)
Reviewed on August 10, 2003
Karla how this touches me so, a splendid write...I WILL NEVER FORGET!!!!
((((Hugs))))
~Nikki~

Reviewed by Zenith Elliott
Reviewed on August 10, 2003
This brought tears to my eyes such a heartwrenching write..{{{Karla}}}

Reviewed by na na (Reader)
Reviewed on August 10, 2003
Karla, I guess some of us will always see the ash colored street in our minds and feel the pain in our heart. So sad this poem and yet it reminds us of something we
should never forget. Your friend Bill HUgsssssssssssssssssssssssssssssss!!!!.

Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on August 10, 2003
A sad look back to the horror imprinted on our minds forever!Well done Karla!Excellent poetry!

Reviewed on August 10, 2003
No one will ever forget. Poignant write, dear friend.
(((((((((((Karla)))))))))))

Reviewed by - - - - - TRASK
Reviewed on August 10, 2003
For Out of Stife Comes Beauty, Comes That TRUTH,That SLEUTH Made His Own Bed, He Sleeps In The Red Sign, While Yor Eye Cannot see, (God) Already Knew Who Ta SCREW BIG Time!!

TRASK

Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)
Reviewed on August 10, 2003
Yes, it was a day of ash-covered streets and you wrote it well. It is a pity that America seems to have just forgotten what happened to their country on that infamous day.

Reviewed by Trixie Love
Reviewed on August 10, 2003
Oh Karla,
This is so touching...
Make me choke up inside...

Love & Hugs
Trixie :)

Reviewed on August 10, 2003
heartwrenching write; thanks for posting! >tears < (((HUGS))) and much love, your twin, karen lynn. "i will NEVER forget!"


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