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Unknown Someone (FICTION)
by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner → (All Poetry by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner)
  
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I went to work that morning,
Just like I had always done,
Not knowing my life would change,
Thanks to an unknown someone,
I was at the Trade Towers,
To attend a meeting there,
There was some sort of trouble,
They told us, "Go down the stairs,"
That would be a long climb down,
At my age, I'm not that strong,
But in the air, hints of smoke,
Something's definately wrong,
What will my decision be?
It will be one hard to make,
Do I go or do I stay?
When I feel the building shake,
I don't think I can make it,
But I start the long way down,
Quiet panic's in the air,
Someone says, "How 'bout this town?"
I laugh, say, "I'm not from here,
I am from San Fransisco,
We don't have buildings this high,
How much more we've got to go?"
We descend, floor after floor,
My legs are feeling the strain,
Force myself to take a step,
I cannot believe the pain,
One more step--then another,
I wipe the sweat from my face,
No--that's it--I've got to rest,
I cannot keep up the pace,
Someone takes my hand in his,
It's a New York fireman,
"You all right?" he asks, concerned,
Asks my name, I tell him, "Anne,"
"Anne," he says, "We've got to go,
It's too dangerous to stay,
We're not too far from safety,
Can you go a little way?"
He takes my hand in his hands,
He says he won't leave my side,
Slowly, slowly, we descend,
And pretty soon, we're outside,
"Now, RUN," he says, turns away,
As far as you can," he calls,
I run...I run...turn around,
And I see the Tower fall....
Thanks to an unknown someone,
I somehow escaped--alive,
He stayed with me, to the end,
And thanks to him, I survived,
No, that's not exactly true ,
SomeOne Else was there that day,
The Good Lord helped me as well,
He sent an angel my way.

"Always remember and never forget."

(C) Karla Dorman, 2003


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Reviewed by La Belle Rouge (Reader)
Reviewed on August 28, 2003
Grabs the attention and heart, well done, Karla.

Reviewed by J. Murphy
Reviewed on August 28, 2003
Nice pov and voice in this and the implications that an unknown someone helped the fictional character who is also an unknown character is clever. This chatacter could be a lot of people that servived that day and so your piece brings all those experiences together. J.

Reviewed by Bhuwan Thapaliya
Reviewed on August 28, 2003
Karla...another outstanding write from you my friend.....BHUWAN

Reviewed on August 27, 2003
Karla is the two year anniversary of that horrifc event fast approaches your words make me think.. What a wonderful write I will always remember...
God Bless
~Michelle~

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Reviewed on August 27, 2003
Another excellent remembrance...beautifully written Karla!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by Kate Clifford (Reader)
Reviewed on August 27, 2003
Very beautifully done. I felt like I was there witnessing the whole thing, taking in the smoke and feeling the pain of going down to many stairs. Tears at the end. That is a sign of a good write. Excellent work!

Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on August 27, 2003
Another excellent remembrance Karla!

Reviewed by jude forese
Reviewed on August 27, 2003
you were much too close for comfort... excellent account...

Reviewed by Lady Peg (Reader)
Reviewed on August 27, 2003
{{{KARLA}}}}
This is so excellent a sureal feel in the descriptions..
Excellent tribute dear one no one will forget!!!!!
Lady Peg

Reviewed by Nicole Davis Vergara (Reader)
Reviewed on August 27, 2003
{{{{KARLA}}}}}
This is just splendid, the feeling from it, the obvious emotion you put into it...had me every step of the way!
I SHALL NEVER FORGET THOSE LOVED ONES I LOST PERSONALLY NOR THE LOVED ONES OF OTHERS LOST!
((((Hugs))))
~Nikki~

Reviewed by Jill Eisnaugle
Reviewed on August 27, 2003
Never, ever forget, Karla. Tears, this day
-- in more ways than one.
I will never forget you, either.
Beautiful 9/11 tribute.

Jill :)

Reviewed by Kay P Devenish
Reviewed on August 27, 2003
How could anyone forget that day?Never will I.I am trembling just thinking of it.
A wonderful poem!

Reviewed on August 27, 2003
((((((((KARLA)))))))

this story/poem held my rapt attention from beginning to end; you are a master story teller! your talent shines brilliantly, and i could see the events unfolding as i read your words! that is the mark of a truly gifted writer, and you are going to go far with it! outstanding work, karla; i applaud you! BRAVA! (((((HUGS))))) and much love, your twin, karen lynn. :( >tears < *never forget*


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