dammit (revised) (poem) by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner on AuthorsDen

Reviewed on September 14, 2003

Powerful, Karla. This poem is filled with piss and vinegar but it tugs at the emotional heart strings of us all. Well done.

Reviewed by Sarah Tagert

Reviewed on September 3, 2003

it would be next to impossiable to forget the images in my head from that day

Reviewed by William Bonilla

Reviewed on September 2, 2003

An awesome write ... Karla
powerful
I too have ro revise one of my old memorable poems.

thanks for sharing
William

Reviewed by La Belle Rouge (Reader)

Reviewed on September 2, 2003

Powerful statement, Karla.

Reviewed by Christine Morell

Reviewed on September 2, 2003

Strong and moving piece karla. Excellent
Love
~Chrissie

Reviewed by Bhuwan Thapaliya

Reviewed on September 2, 2003

Karla...very very touchy write!!!!

Reviewed by Jenni Kalicharan

Reviewed on September 2, 2003

Powerfully touching...
Hugs
Jenni

Reviewed by Ron (sketchman) Axelson (Reader)

Reviewed on September 1, 2003

Powerful one karla. Thanks for sharing this. I can never forget. Your friend......Ron.... Have a great rest of the week karla...

Reviewed by Denise Edwards

Reviewed on September 1, 2003

You said a mouthful! Thanks for writing this.

~~~love: Denise

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes

Reviewed on September 1, 2003

This was excellently written Karla!!

Love tinka

Reviewed by Michelle Kidwell Power In The Pen

Reviewed on August 31, 2003

Ty for sharing your words with us, they always make me think, keep up the great work...
God Bless
~Michelle~

Reviewed by Sandie May Joyce (Sandie Angel)

Reviewed on August 31, 2003

Powerful emotional piece, Karla!

May Lu a.k.a. Sandie Angel :o)

Reviewed by Retta (Reindeer) Mckenzie

Reviewed on August 31, 2003

This was excellent Karla,

Reindeer

Reviewed by jude forese

Reviewed on August 31, 2003

well done!

Reviewed by Lisa Hilbers

Reviewed on August 31, 2003

Excellent. Damn good write Karla! ~SH~

Reviewed by Elizabeth Taylor (Reader)

Reviewed on August 31, 2003

Nicely done.

Reviewed by E T Waldron

Reviewed on August 31, 2003

A powerhouse of a write Karla! Very moving!

Reviewed by Evelyn Simon

Reviewed on August 31, 2003

That was a damn good write! :0)

Reviewed by Robert Blackwell (Reader)

Reviewed on August 31, 2003

Powerful, powerful write! {{{{hugs}}}

Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado

Reviewed on August 31, 2003

(((karla)))

>tears < :( raw, real, heartbreaking, heartfelt, emotional write that grabs and won't let go--love the flow and rhyming, and style this is written in--hip hop brimming with anger. well done, i will always remember and never forget, and "god bless america again!" :( ((((((HUGS)))))) and love, your twin sister, karen lynn. :(