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can i have a restart?
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can i have a restart--that day over again?
that one turned out wrong--don't like the way it happened
let's go back, let's change things to before they occurred
let's do things the way they do on the computer

*click*
the attacks--our defenses would forstall
*click*
ground zero--no more--the towers stand tall
*click*
the pentagon walls stand strong, undamaged
*click*
a midwestern field would not be ravaged
*click*
our loved ones--they're safe, all accounted for
*click*
there would be no need for this awful war
*click*
heroes would do what they love, saving lives
*click*
my friend, joyce, wouldn't have died--she survived
*click*
we wouldn't see the images that seared
*click*
there would be no nightmares, there'd be no tears
*click*
we wouldn't be glued to our t.v. screens
*click*
we could go about our normal routines
*click*

and SAVE

can i have a restart? that day over again?
that one turned out wrong--don't like the way it happened
let's go back, let's change things to before they occurred
let's do things the way they do on the computer

*always remember and never forget*

(C) karla dorman, 2003


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 Reviews of "can i have a restart?"
Reviewed by Lisa Hilbers
Reviewed on September 6, 2003
Yes, let's go back and *click* and see if we can't change the whole day! Or maybe we need to go back even further than that day and see what we can remold. Great write Karla. Lisa

Reviewed on September 6, 2003
This was excellent, I wish we could restart that day,

Reindeer

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Reviewed on September 6, 2003
Really great write Karla!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by Amor Sabor
Reviewed on September 5, 2003
It would be nice to click it all away and restart that easily but now we are changed from here on in and must find new ways of living. Great write, Karla.
Amor

Reviewed by Jenni Kalicharan
Reviewed on September 5, 2003
Great write, Karla.
Hugs
Jenni

Reviewed by Sarah Tagert
Reviewed on September 5, 2003
we can't change our past, unfortunatly, but all we can do it learn and make the future better, great write!

Reviewed by Leland Waldrip
Reviewed on September 5, 2003
Great write, Karla. We can imagine it working that way. That would be wonderful. Reminds me of my kids calling out, "DO OVER!"when things didn't go right for them. Unfortunately, like my poem "What Happened Today?" points out, time only moves forward.
Best regards,
Leland

Reviewed by Kate Clifford (Reader)
Reviewed on September 5, 2003
Great Write!

Reviewed by - - - - - TRASK
Reviewed on September 5, 2003
Problem Is: What Man(Evil) Greed $$$ Has Set In Motion Is Already Taken Place,i.e. Even Man Cannot Restart It!

TRASK

Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on September 5, 2003
You keep them coming, fine work Karla!

Reviewed by Zenith Elliott
Reviewed on September 5, 2003
If only that could be, sad but well written poem Karla! ~Z~

Reviewed on September 5, 2003
(((KARLA)))

powerful, heartwrenching write. "click." oh, if only it were that simple so that we could erase that awful day from our memory, but we can't. we must go on and not let terror rule!

sure wish that day didn't have to happen,
but unfortunately, it did; and now we are forever changed. God be with our nation as we approach the 2nd year anniversary of the terror attacks, and may God bless and protect our nation in this uncertain time! And may He bless you with your needs; you are in my prayers! you have a lot of people praying for you; and i am leading the prayers!

(((((((((((((((HUGS))))))))))))))) and much love, your twin, karen lynn. :( >tears <


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