random winds.
a tornado,
a hurricane,
strong straight line winds
are capable
of destroying
all--everything
caught in its path.
they're capricious,
these random winds
that suddenly
strike, sometimes with
little warning;
they don't care who
will survive or
who dies today.
those that live are
forever changed
by the forces
that they had no
control over,
altered by chance,
by random winds.
terror is like that.
random winds that
september ripped
buildings...skylines...
people...apart.
in one moment,
our lives were touched
by horror, the
devastation
we felt nearly
destroyed our hearts.
too many of
our loved ones died,
far too many
heroes paid the
ultimate price.
but--we will rise.
we will rise, from
the ashy depths,
from the debris,
we will unite,
our bruised, battered
hands united
as one...we will
rise...we WILL rise.
(C) Karla Dorman, 2003.
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Reviewed by Nicole Davis Vergara (Reader)
Reviewed on September 19, 2003
Yes yes excellant work here Karla!
BRAVO!!!!
((((Hugs))))
~Nikki~
excellent visuals and comparison. "...they don't care who will survive or who dies today/those that live are forever changed by the forces that they had no control over,/altered by chance, by random winds./terror is like that." powerful words; very well written!
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((((((((((((HUGS))))))))))))) and much love, your twin, karen lynn. :( >tears <
When two men hit the reset button and decide to go out looking for the good in the world, they not only find it but also a lot more.
P.S. The title is listed on Amazon under Look for Something Good by Robert Drews (not by Robert H. Drews)
BRAVO!!!!
((((Hugs))))
~Nikki~
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~Michelle~
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~Chrissie
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Debs said thanks and send his best wishes and prAYERS....
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Love Tinka
*NEVER FORGET* *GOD BLESS AMERICA AGAIN!*
((((((((((((HUGS))))))))))))) and much love, your twin, karen lynn. :( >tears <