nightmare (poem) by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner on AuthorsDen

Reviewed by serenety L (Reader)

Reviewed on November 1, 2003

Happened to me before. I remember.
A nightmare.
You did a great job on writing this poem. Excellent.
Nico

Reviewed by Michelle Kidwell Power In The Pen

Reviewed on October 29, 2003

Ugh I had to read this before turning in... Great write though, excellent...
God Bless
~Michelle~
((((Hugz))))

Reviewed by Kate Clifford (Reader)

Reviewed on October 29, 2003

Now this gives me nightmares! Great write!

Reviewed by Ed Matlack

Reviewed on October 29, 2003

Oh Karla, I can almost imagine that and I don't want to have too! I went to the dentist once, and I guess I have done too many drugs in my day as when they put in the required amount of anesthesia I just kept talking on and on, they had to double up on it and then I just about stayed awake thru the whole tooth removal...cost a bundle to put me out, let me tell ya, LOL! Thanks for another encounter with a real nightmare....Peace, ED & Rufuz (w00f)

Reviewed by Rebekah Rosie Lang

Reviewed on October 29, 2003

Oh Lordy, you had me scared out of my wits!
What are you trying to do? (Just kidding)
What an Excellent poem!
That has been my worst nightmare!
I WOKE UP during brain surgery one time!
Scared my neurosurgeon out-of-his wits!
Funny now but at the time it was quite serious!
Oh,well!
Take care!
Becca

Reviewed by M.Bennett Hooper (Mikii)

Reviewed on October 29, 2003

Been there and I hear you girlfriend. I'm still awake and cold. Great write. (((((((((Mikii)))))))))).

Reviewed by Alexander Shaumyan (Reader)

Reviewed on October 29, 2003

Good one, Karla. And some people don't wake up from the anesthesia. That can happen too.

Reviewed by Sue Hess

Reviewed on October 29, 2003

scary, i always worry about this

Reviewed by Lisa Hilbers

Reviewed on October 29, 2003

Uh Karla? Dear, next time I have surgery which won't be too long from now,,,I'm sure this will just keep running through my mind!!!! If you wanted to scare the crud out of me,,this was surely the way to do it! Mission Accomplished! Lisa

Reviewed by Mark Rockeymoore

Reviewed on October 29, 2003

ugh...my sister just graduated from johns hopkins...she's an anesthesiologist. she's talked to me about this before. this was scary..which is a testament to your skills! intense write, poet...

Reviewed by - - - - - TRASK

Reviewed on October 29, 2003

Nightmare It Is Only Beginning!

TRASK

Reviewed by Paul Berube

Reviewed on October 29, 2003

karla, I'm going to the doctors' tomorrow and they're not gonna even get close to me. If I can help it.( LOL )

Reviewed by Nicole Davis Vergara (Reader)

Reviewed on October 29, 2003

Okay Karla now that you have scared the begeezums out of me I am cancelling my gyn appointment!!!!
Great Work, Write and Awesome portrayal!!!!
((((Hugs))))
~Nikki~

Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado

Reviewed on October 29, 2003

oh, god, this scared the h-e double hockey stick outta' me; whatta you trying to do? give me hospital nightmares? YIKES! an intense read; sure hope this NEVER happens to me or to YOU! SCARY stuff! well done! enjoyed; this one had me hooked! (((HUGS))) and much love, your twin, karen lynn. :0

Reviewed by ya mama (Reader)

Reviewed on October 29, 2003

a nice one karla